T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement and tense), avoid hesitations, and make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence stating frequency, then briefly explain when and why using one linking word. Use correct verb forms and plural/singular forms.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts in the evenings, especially when I go for late workouts, because they are comfortable and let me move freely.

제안: Be direct and avoid repetition. Use one clear reason sentence with a linking word and correct possessive/pronoun forms. Remove fillers like 'uh' and repetitive phrases, and finish with a concise extra detail if needed.

예시: Yes, I buy T-shirts quite often because they fit well and are comfortable for exercising; for example, I usually buy basic cotton T-shirts for my gym sessions.

제안: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and a contrasting supporting detail using linking words (e.g. 'however' or 'while'). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, remove extra words) and give a specific example of traditional clothing versus modern T-shirts.

예시: In my opinion, it depends on personal preference: while many older people wear T-shirts for comfort and a casual look, others prefer traditional fabrics like saris or tunics for cultural reasons.

제안: Use correct past tense and concise structure: state clearly that you wore T-shirts and give one specific reason and a brief supporting detail. Fix pronoun and possessive phrases (e.g. 'my parents bought them').

예시: Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child because they were comfortable for playing; my parents usually bought simple cotton T-shirts for me.

× Umm, I usually wear T-shirts in the evening once I walks out with late for workouts and I love T-shirt because it's comfortable for me to do many activities in the evening.

✓ Umm, I usually wear T-shirts in the evening when I go out late for workouts, and I love T-shirts because they're comfortable for me to do many activities in the evening.

The verb 'walks' is incorrect for the subject 'I'; use the base form 'go' for first person. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural to match 'I usually wear T-shirts' and 'it's' changed to 'they're' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'when I go out late' instead of 'once I walks out with late'. Combine clauses with commas and 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, I'm a big fan of T-shirts because I like, uh, the size of the T-shirts and it's comfortable to me to do many activities when I wear and go in into workout with T-shirts and also I love.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of T-shirts because I like their fit and they're comfortable for me to do many activities when I wear them for workouts, and I also love them.

Use the pronoun 'them' to refer to plural 'T-shirts' (avoid 'it's'). 'The size of the T-shirts' is better as 'their fit'. 'Go into workout' is unnatural; use 'for workouts'. Ensure consistent plural agreement and use correct verb forms and pronouns.

× From my opinion is depend on personal preference because some people they just love T-shirts for uh, older people, but while some people did just use their the umm traditional fabric for older people.

✓ In my opinion, it depends on personal preference because some people just like T-shirts for older people, while others prefer traditional fabrics.

Use 'In my opinion' not 'From my opinion', and verb agreement requires 'it depends'. Avoid subject repetition 'some people they'; use 'some people' or 'others'. 'Did just use' is incorrect past tense; present 'prefer' fits the general statement. Remove extra articles 'the' before 'traditional fabric' and pluralize to 'fabrics' for generality.

× Yes, I tend to wear T-shirts when I was a kid because it's comfortable and a casual while I do many activity and so I love to wear is by my money of parents.

✓ Yes, I tended to wear T-shirts when I was a kid because they were comfortable and casual when I did many activities, and I liked wearing the ones my parents bought for me.

The sentence mixes present and past; use past tense 'tended' and 'were' for past habits. 'It's' must be 'they were' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. 'Many activity' should be plural 'many activities'. 'I love to wear is by my money of parents' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I liked wearing the ones my parents bought for me' to express possession and past preference.