T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and vary vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief specific detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating 'every'.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts on weekdays because I attend classes; for example, I often choose a plain white T-shirt for comfort and ease of matching with jeans.

제안: Provide a clear direct response, correct grammar and use specific details. Use a linking word to explain why you don’t buy many and give a short example or frequency phrase.

예시: Not really. I only buy one or two T-shirts a year because my budget is limited; however, if I had more money I would buy a few casual and a couple of smart T-shirts for different occasions.

제안: Make the sentence structure accurate and add a brief reason or example. Use cohesive words like 'for example' or 'in particular' to support your claim and correct plural forms.

예시: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country; for example, many grandparents and parents wear colorful, patterned T-shirts for outings and family events.

제안: Answer clearly in past tense and correct vocabulary. Start with a direct past-tense statement, then add a concise reason or specific detail. Avoid mixing tenses and use correct nouns (e.g., 'dresses' not 'dressed').

예시: No, I didn't wear T-shirts as a child; I preferred dresses and wore them almost every day because they were the customary childhood clothing in my family.

× I am a student and I have to attend class every weekday so I usually wear a white T-shirt every day.

✓ I am a student and I have to attend classes every weekday, so I usually wear a white T-shirt every day.

Plural noun 'class' should be 'classes' because 'every weekday' implies multiple class sessions. This is a singular/plural noun usage within present tense description; change keeps present-tense meaning. Suggestion: use plural for repeated events ('classes').

× No I don't often buy T-shirt, I just have one to two T-shirt to wear all year.

✓ No, I don't often buy T-shirts; I just have one or two T-shirts to wear all year.

Countable noun 'T-shirt' must be plural when referring to more than one. Use 'one or two' rather than 'one to two'. Add commas and a semicolon for clarity. Suggestion: use plural form with numeric expressions ('one or two T-shirts').

× But if I had a chance I would like to buy more.

✓ But if I had the chance, I would like to buy more.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'chance' is needed in this conditional. Also add a comma after the if-clause. This fits a second conditional meaning a hypothetical present/future desire. Suggestion: include 'the' and punctuation for natural phrasing.

× I believe T-shirt in my country are very fashionable.

✓ I believe T-shirts in my country are very fashionable.

Two issues: plural noun 'T-shirt' should be 'T-shirts', and subject-verb agreement: plural 'T-shirts' requires 'are'. Correction fixes pluralization and keeps present-tense belief. Suggestion: pluralize nouns when speaking generally about types of clothing.

× Every day I see the elders, especially my grandparents and even my parents wear colorful different kinds of T-shirt.

✓ Every day I see the elders, especially my grandparents and my parents, wearing many different kinds of colorful T-shirts.

Several problems: 'the elders' can be 'elders' but is acceptable; 'T-shirt' must be plural; adjective order adjusted ('many different kinds of colorful T-shirts'); verb structure changed to 'wearing' to link to 'I see'. Suggestion: pluralize clothing words and use present participle 'wearing' after 'see' for continuous observation.

× When I was young I didn't wear T-shirt.

✓ When I was young, I didn't wear T-shirts.

Pluralize 'T-shirt' because referring generally to shirts during childhood. Add comma after subordinate clause for clarity. Keep simple past tense. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about items worn in the past.

× I would prefer to wear dressed and in fact I wear it all the time when I was small.

✓ I preferred to wear dresses, and in fact I wore them all the time when I was small.

Multiple errors: 'prefer' should be past form 'preferred' to match past-time context, 'dressed' is incorrect noun—use 'dresses', and pronoun/verb agreement must be past ('wore') and plural pronoun 'them'. The sentence is about past habits, so use past tense consistently. Suggestion: match tense across verbs and use correct noun forms for clothing.