T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix awkward phrases (e.g., “I don't prefer wearing T-shirts” → “I prefer not to wear T-shirts”) and avoid redundancy.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts at home because they are very comfortable and relaxed. However, if I have plans to go out, I prefer to wear a shirt to look more presentable.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar and avoid unclear expressions. Give a clear reason and one supporting detail. Replace unclear metaphors (“bear shaped body type”, “don't shoot me”) with simple descriptions and use linking words.

예시: Not really. I rarely buy T-shirts because I prefer my brother's oversized ones; they fit comfortably. Also, T-shirts don't flatter my body shape, so I tend to avoid buying them.

제안: Make the answer more organized and accurate. Start with a clear opinion, then explain with specific examples and a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., “I don't think they are fashionable”).

예시: In my country, T-shirts are not very fashionable among older people. For example, many older women prefer traditional kurtas and older men often wear polo shirts and trousers, which are seen as more appropriate.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct word choice. Use past tense consistently and give one clear reason or short anecdote that supports your answer. Replace unclear words (“frogs”) and irrelevant detail about fighting unless it supports the point.

예시: I didn’t wear many T-shirts as a child. Instead, I preferred wearing skirts and dresses, so my parents often bought those for me rather than T-shirts.

× I usually wear T-shirts when I'm at home and I don't have plans for that day because T-shirts make me feel really comfortable and relaxed.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts when I'm at home and I don't have plans for the day because T-shirts make me feel really comfortable and relaxed.

Redundant phrase 'for that day' is awkward; 'for the day' is more natural in this context. Keep present simple tense consistent for habitual actions.

× Otherwise, if I have plans, I don't prefer wearing T-shirts.

✓ If I have plans, I prefer not to wear T-shirts.

The original uses awkward negative construction 'I don't prefer wearing'; restructuring to 'I prefer not to wear' is clearer and grammatically correct. This fits present simple preference expression.

× Rather than that I would wear a shirt.

✓ Instead, I would wear a shirt.

'Rather than that' is unnatural here; 'Instead' or 'Rather' followed by a comma is correct. Use 'I would wear a shirt' to show alternative choice.

× No, I don't buy T-shirts really often.

✓ No, I don't buy T-shirts very often.

Use 'very often' instead of 'really often' for natural adverb placement in present simple negative sentences.

× I usually wear T-shirt my brother's T-shirts because they are oversized and are really comfortable.

✓ I usually wear my brother's T-shirts because they are oversized and really comfortable.

Original misses possessive placement and has extra 'T-shirt'. Correct order is 'wear my brother's T-shirts'. Also drop redundant 'are' before 'really comfortable'.

× Since I am a bear shaped body type, T-shirts don't shoot me so I don't buy often.

✓ Since I have a bear-shaped body type, T-shirts don't suit me, so I don't buy them often.

Use 'have' with 'body type', hyphenate 'bear-shaped', use 'suit' not 'shoot', add object 'them' with 'buy often'. Also add commas for clarity.

× In my country most of the people don't prefer wearing T-shirts and I don't think there are fashionable because mostly the women prefer wearing kurtas and the men wear a polo shirt and pants.

✓ In my country most people don't prefer wearing T-shirts, and I don't think they are fashionable because women mostly prefer wearing kurtas and men wear polo shirts and trousers.

Remove 'of' in 'most people', use 'they' to refer to T-shirts, pluralize 'polo shirts' and use 'trousers' (or 'pants') consistently. Reorder 'mostly' to 'women mostly prefer' for natural adverb placement.

× As far as I remember, I don't think I used to wear a lot of T-shirts when I was a kid because since childhood I used to love wearing skirts and frogs.

✓ As far as I remember, I don't think I used to wear a lot of T-shirts when I was a kid because since childhood I used to love wearing skirts and frocks.

The likely intended word is 'frocks' (dresses), not 'frogs'. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual actions; keep tense consistent. Correct the vocabulary error.

× There was one time I fought with my parents.

✓ There was one time when I fought with my parents.

Add 'when' to link 'one time' with the clause; this produces a grammatically complete temporal relative clause.