T-shirt— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは明確で自然ですが、情報が少し冗長になっています。話の構成を改善し、主旨文→補足（理由や例）という順で短く整理してください。具体的には、“occasionally”の頻度を簡単に示し、その後で場面と理由を1文ずつで述べるといいです。接続詞（e.g. so, because, when）を適切に使い、文は最大5文以内にまとめましょう。

예시: I wear T-shirts only occasionally—about once or twice a week. I usually put them on at home or for gym sessions because they are comfortable. When I go out with friends I might wear a T-shirt if the meeting is casual, but I prefer more formal clothes for work because they give a better impression.

제안: 答えは簡潔で関連性がありますが、より具体的な頻度や例を加えると説得力が増します。頻度を数字や周期で示し、旅行先で買う理由や印象に残る1つの具体例を挙げると良いです。接続語を使って理由と例をつなげてください。

예시: Not very often — maybe once or twice a year. I already have plenty, so I only buy new T-shirts as souvenirs when I travel because they remind me of the trip. For example, I bought a T-shirt with a local festival logo when I visited Kyoto last year.

제안: 意見は明確ですが、より具体的な理由や比較を加えると説得力が上がります。例えば、どの世代がどのような場面でフォーマルな服を選ぶのか、あるいは流行の変化について短く触れてください。接続語（for example, because, while）で論理を整理しましょう。

예시: I don't think T-shirts are very fashionable among older people in my country because they typically prefer conservative, classic clothing. For example, older people often wear button-down shirts or blouses for family gatherings and avoid T-shirts since they consider them too casual.

제안: 回答は自然で具体的なエピソードがあり良いです。さらに良くするには、頻度や年齢、具体的な場面（週末、体育の時間など）を一言加えて描写を強めると良いでしょう。接続語で経験と理由をつなげてください。

예시: Yes, I wore T-shirts a lot when I was a child, especially during primary school. I played volleyball with my friends every weekend, so T-shirts were practical and I didn't worry about getting them dirty.

× I wear T-shirts occasionally, mainly at home or when I go to the gym for work or when I hang out with friends. I choose more formal clothes because they make a better impression.

✓ I wear T-shirts occasionally, mainly at home, when I go to the gym, or when I hang out with friends. I choose more formal clothes because they make a better impression.

The original sentence used a long series of clauses connected by 'or' which makes the sentence slightly awkward; commas and parallel structure improve clarity. No change in tense or meaning was needed. Suggestion: keep parallel phrases and separate list items with commas and use 'or' before the final item.

× I don't buy T-shirts very often because I already have plenty, but I sometimes buy them as souvenirs when I travel abroad.

✓ I don't buy T-shirts very often because I already have plenty, but I sometimes buy them as souvenirs when I travel abroad.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Plenty' is used appropriately without an article. No correction required. Suggestion: none.

× I don't think T-shirts are fashionable for older people in my country. Many of them tend to wear more conservative and classic outfit and they see T-shirts as too casual.

✓ I don't think T-shirts are fashionable for older people in my country. Many of them tend to wear more conservative and classic outfits and they see T-shirts as too casual.

The word 'outfit' should be plural 'outfits' to agree with 'many of them' (multiple people typically wear multiple outfits). This is an adjective/noun number agreement issue rather than pluralization of the subject. Suggestion: make the noun plural when referring to multiple people.

× Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child. I used to play volleyball with my friends, so T-shirts were practical since I didn't mind getting them dirty.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child. I used to play volleyball with my friends, so T-shirts were practical because I didn't mind getting them dirty.

The original 'so' is acceptable, but replacing 'so' with 'because' slightly clarifies causal relationship; both are grammatically correct in past context. The sentence correctly uses past tense. Suggestion: use 'because' for clearer causal linking when explaining reasons.