Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh và không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc lặp lại. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers because I study finance and banking, which requires me to work with numbers every day.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lặp lại và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work because I plan to work in banking, where handling numbers is an essential part of daily tasks.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cảm nhận của bạn khi học toán lúc nhỏ.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I found it interesting to solve problems and understand how numbers work in real life.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn tại sao những con số đó quan trọng với bạn.

예시: The numbers that are important to me include my parents' birthdays and phone numbers because they help me remember special occasions and stay in touch with them.

× I guess I think. Goodnight. Let me. My major is finance and banking show I wish informations. Great. Assess with numbers every day so I. Very.

✓ I guess I think my major is finance and banking, so I wish to have information. I work with numbers every day, so I am very good at it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining related ideas into complete sentences improves clarity and coherence.

× Oh yes, I will use numbers in your in my work in the future, which is my major is finance and banking show when I work in a bank I use number every day so.

✓ Oh yes, I will use numbers in my work in the future, as my major is finance and banking. When I work in a bank, I use numbers every day.

The phrase 'in your in my work' is incorrect; 'your' should be replaced with 'my' to match the subject. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I think in the future I continue use numbers in my work.

✓ I think in the future I will continue using numbers in my work.

After 'continue', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('using'). Also, 'will' is needed to indicate future tense.

× Oh yes, it is sad When is whiskey I usually like when I. Starting my and the base every day I usually read information about economies an finance data re about the break in the world.

✓ Oh yes, I usually like studying math. Every day, I read information about economics and financial data related to the break in the world.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. Rewriting into clear, complete sentences improves understanding.

× Oh yes, I usually like when I. Starting my and the base every day I usually read information about economies an finance data re about the break in the world.

✓ Oh yes, I usually like it when I start my day. Every day, I read information about economies and financial data related to the break in the world.

'Economies' is correct as plural, but 'finance data' should be 'financial data' to use the correct adjective form. Also, sentence fragments need correction.

× I've seen numbers that are important to me is Omar birthday my parents birthday Ann my parents phone my parents?

✓ The numbers that are important to me are Omar's birthday, my parents' birthdays, and my parents' phone numbers.

Possessive forms are needed ('Omar's birthday', 'parents' birthdays'). Also, 'phone' should be plural 'phone numbers' to match context.

× I want to make up some presents and gifts for my parents on and their birthday and when. Had had 1/2.

✓ I want to prepare some presents and gifts for my parents on their birthdays.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Simplifying and completing the sentence improves clarity.