Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is honest but a bit unclear and redundant. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Also, avoid repeating the same idea with different words. For example, you can say: "Honestly, I have a poor memory, especially when it comes to numbers. For instance, I struggle to memorize even a few vocabulary words within a short time."

예시: Honestly, I have a poor memory, especially when it comes to numbers. For instance, I struggle to memorize even a few vocabulary words within a short time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct singular/plural forms and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "Yes, numbers represent data, which is very important in my future work. By presenting accurate data, I can convince others effectively."

예시: Yes, numbers represent data, which is very important in my future work. By presenting accurate data, I can convince others effectively.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your thoughts clearly and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons. For example: "I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because it involved many calculations and logical thinking, which I found challenging. When I encountered complex formulas, I often felt overwhelmed."

예시: I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because it involved many calculations and logical thinking, which I found challenging. When I encountered complex formulas, I often felt overwhelmed.

제안: Your answer is honest but lacks detail and coherence. Try to provide a clearer response with supporting reasons and use linking words. For example: "I don't consider any numbers particularly important because I have a poor memory and find it hard to remember digits. Therefore, I tend to avoid focusing on numbers."

예시: I don't consider any numbers particularly important because I have a poor memory and find it hard to remember digits. Therefore, I tend to avoid focusing on numbers.

× While honestly speaking my memory is terrible, it in other words, it's awful.

✓ While honestly speaking, my memory is terrible; in other words, it's awful.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it' without a clear antecedent and lacks proper punctuation. Replacing 'it' with a semicolon and adding a comma improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× when I recite the vocabularies, I cannot even recite three in 20 minutes.

✓ when I recite vocabulary, I cannot even recite three words in 20 minutes.

The word 'vocabularies' is incorrect because 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun. Also, specifying 'three words' clarifies the meaning.

× numbers represents the data.

✓ numbers represent the data.

The subject 'numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'represent' to agree in number.

× It's very important that we show exactly the datas to the people

✓ It's very important that we show exactly the data to the people

The word 'data' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'datas'.

× So I definitely will use the numbers and also data in the future career as well to illustrate my.

✓ So I definitely will use numbers and data in my future career to illustrate my points.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Removing unnecessary articles and completing the thought improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm not good at studying, especially for the math because it requires a lot of calculations and thinking logic.

✓ I'm not good at studying, especially math, because it requires a lot of calculations and logical thinking.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'especially math' is the correct phrase. Also, 'thinking logic' should be 'logical thinking'.

× So I I would say I'm not in I'm not in thy sight.

✓ So I would say I'm not good at it.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors ('thy sight' is incorrect). Simplifying the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× If I face a lot of, you know, formulas and equations, I will be tend to just.

✓ If I face a lot of formulas and equations, I tend to just give up.

The phrase 'I will be tend to just' is incorrect. 'I tend to' is the correct form, and the sentence needs completion for clarity.

× I don't think there's any numbers that I think is crucial.

✓ I don't think there are any numbers that I think are crucial.

'Numbers' is plural, so 'there are' and 'are crucial' should be used instead of singular forms.

× I don't remember those those digital things, so I don't like it.

✓ I don't remember those digital things, so I don't like them.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'things'; 'them' is the correct pronoun to use.