Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details without repetition. Avoid grammatical errors and redundant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers, especially those of my family and close friends. For example, when I was a child and did not have a phone, I could recall all their contact numbers. This ability has always helped me stay connected with them.

제안: Your answer should be more coherent and focused. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why numbers are important in your field with specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition.

예시: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work because I am studying computer science engineering, where mathematics plays a crucial role. For instance, I often work with numerical data and algorithms, which require strong numerical skills.

제안: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear statement, then support it with specific details or examples. Use linking words to make your answer more fluent.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because it was my favorite subject. My mother often praised my skills, saying I was brilliant at math. Since then, I have always found math interesting and enjoyable.

제안: Your answer should be more complete and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why certain numbers are important with specific reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition.

예시: Many numbers are important to me, such as those of my family and close friends. However, the most crucial numbers are my mother's and father's contact numbers because, when I did not have my phone, remembering these numbers was essential for emergencies.

× Yes, I am quite good with memorizing the numbers especially for especially when is talking about my friends, families and my close one numbers when I was child.

✓ Yes, I am quite good at memorizing numbers, especially when talking about my friends, family, and close ones' numbers from when I was a child.

The phrase 'good with memorizing' should be 'good at memorizing' as 'good at' is the correct collocation. Also, 'especially for especially when is talking' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'especially when talking'. 'Families' should be 'family' as a collective noun here, and 'close one numbers' should be 'close ones' numbers'. 'When I was child' lacks the article 'a' before 'child'.

× I Remember Remember all my family members when I have didn't phone with my with me and it's helped me in really good.

✓ I remember all my family members when I didn't have my phone with me, and it helped me a lot.

The verb 'Remember' should be in lowercase and not repeated. 'Have didn't' is incorrect; the correct past tense negative form is 'didn't have'. 'With my with me' is redundant and should be simplified to 'with me'. 'It's helped me in really good' is incorrect; it should be 'it helped me a lot' to express past benefit clearly.

× Obviously, I would like to using the numbers in my future life as I am a computer science engineering students and mathematics is a main curriculum for me.

✓ Obviously, I would like to use numbers in my future life as I am a computer science engineering student and mathematics is a main subject for me.

'Would like to using' is incorrect; after 'would like to' the base form of the verb 'use' should be used. 'Students' should be singular 'student' to agree with 'I'. 'Curriculum' is a collective term; 'subject' is more appropriate here.

× That's why I enjoyed to find numerical and the number and obviously the contact number as well as and it's helpful and lose lose your stress that's important.

✓ That's why I enjoy finding numbers, including contact numbers, as it is helpful and helps reduce stress, which is important.

'Enjoyed to find' is incorrect; 'enjoy' is followed by the gerund 'finding'. The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'and' and repeated words 'lose lose'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, obviously when I was child math is my favorite subject and I am a good in in the maths.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a child, math was my favorite subject and I was good at math.

'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'Math is my favorite subject' should be in past tense 'was' to match 'when I was a child'. 'I am a good in in the maths' is incorrect; it should be 'I was good at math'.

× I remember that my mom also told me that when I I was child, my maths is brilliant.

✓ I remember that my mom also told me that when I was a child, my math was brilliant.

Again, 'was child' needs 'a'. 'Maths is brilliant' should be past tense 'was brilliant' to match the past context.

× I'm I'm in brilliant in the maths and since from my childhood maths is my favorite subject and I enjoyed a lot.

✓ I'm brilliant in math, and since my childhood, math has been my favorite subject, and I have enjoyed it a lot.

Repeated 'I'm' is an error. 'In brilliant' is incorrect; 'brilliant in' is correct. 'Since from' is incorrect; use 'since'. 'Maths is my favorite subject' should be present perfect 'has been' to indicate duration. 'I enjoyed a lot' should be 'I have enjoyed it a lot' for correct tense and object.

× There are many numbers that are important for me such as my family, my friends or the close ones but most probably the important or crucial number for me is my moms and my father's number because I because I remember that when I didn't have my phone with me, the 2 numbers are very important and.

✓ There are many numbers that are important to me, such as those of my family, my friends, or close ones, but most probably the most important or crucial numbers for me are my mom's and my father's numbers because I remember that when I didn't have my phone with me, these two numbers were very important.

'Important for me' should be 'important to me'. 'My moms' should be 'my mom's' to show possession. 'Number' should be plural 'numbers' as referring to two numbers. 'The 2 numbers are very important and.' is incomplete; corrected to a complete sentence. 'Because I because I' is repeated and removed.