Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors and slight redundancy. For example, 'more easier' should be 'easier'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Keep your sentences concise and avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers, especially phone numbers and birthdays, because this helps me stay connected with my family and friends. They often feel special when I remember important dates without reminders, so it makes communication easier and more personal.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing, such as 'you are essential' instead of 'they are essential' and 'Numbers helps' instead of 'Numbers help'. Also, try to use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' appropriately to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I believe I will use numbers in my future work because they are essential for analysing data and making informed decisions. For example, if I work in finance, understanding statistics and financial figures will be crucial. Numbers also help to measure progress and evaluate outcomes effectively.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to give a direct response with clear reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide specific details to support your opinion.

예시: As a child, I did not enjoy studying maths because I found it difficult to understand. However, I am trying to improve now because I know it is important.

제안: Your answer covers the question but has some awkward phrasing and minor errors, such as 'reminds of my identity' instead of 'reminds me of my identity' and 'speculating communication' which is unclear. Use linking words like 'also' or 'finally' to connect ideas and be more specific in your explanations.

예시: Numbers that are important to me include my birthday date because it marks a significant personal milestone and reminds me of my identity. Also, my phone number is crucial as it connects me to my family and friends, facilitating communication. Finally, I value numbers related to my work, such as my employee ID.

× It also makes communication more easier and personal.

✓ It also makes communication easier and more personal.

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective, so adding 'more' before it is incorrect. The correct form is 'easier'. Also, 'more' should be placed before 'personal' to form the comparative correctly.

× because you are essential for analysing data and make informed decisions.

✓ because numbers are essential for analysing data and making informed decisions.

The original sentence uses 'you' instead of 'numbers', which is incorrect. Also, 'make' should be 'making' to maintain parallel structure with 'analysing'. The subject 'numbers' is plural, so the verb should agree accordingly.

× Numbers helps to measure progress and evaluate outcomes effectively.

✓ Numbers help to measure progress and evaluate outcomes effectively.

The subject 'Numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps' to agree in number.

× As a child I would like I have more interest on studying maths as I am growing earlier.

✓ As a child, I would have liked to have more interest in studying maths as I was growing up.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and prepositions. 'Would like I have' is incorrect; it should be 'would have liked to have'. Also, 'interest on' should be 'interest in'. 'Growing earlier' is unclear; 'growing up' is the correct phrase.

× Numbers that are important to me include my birthday date as it makes a significant personal milestone and reminds of my identity.

✓ Numbers that are important to me include my birthday date as it marks a significant personal milestone and reminds me of my identity.

The verb 'reminds' requires an object, so 'reminds of my identity' is incomplete. It should be 'reminds me of my identity'. Also, 'makes a milestone' is better expressed as 'marks a milestone'.

× Additionally, my phone number is crucial because it connects to me to my family and friends, speculating communication.

✓ Additionally, my phone number is crucial because it connects me to my family and friends, facilitating communication.

The phrase 'connects to me to my family' is incorrect; it should be 'connects me to my family'. Also, 'speculating communication' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'facilitating communication'.