Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りを修正し、より自然で明確な表現を使うことが重要です。また、答えは簡潔にし、冗長な部分を避けるべきです。例えば、「I am get a remembering numbers」は不自然で、「I am good at remembering numbers」とするのが適切です。

예시: I am good at remembering numbers if they are short and specific, but I often struggle to remember longer sequences.

제안: 答えは直接的で分かりやすいですが、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より論理的にすると良いでしょう。また、具体例を加えると説得力が増します。

예시: I suppose I will not use numbers very often; however, in every job, we need to use numbers at least occasionally, such as when managing budgets or schedules.

제안: 答えは明確ですが、接続詞を使って文を滑らかにし、語彙の幅を広げるとより良くなります。また、具体的な理由や例を加えると効果的です。

예시: I did not usually enjoy math, but I found angles fascinating because solving problems involving them was both entertaining and challenging.

제안: 答えは非常に良く、具体的な理由と個人的な関連性が含まれています。さらに、接続詞を使って文の流れをより自然にすると完璧です。

예시: The number 7 is my lucky number because it is often seen as a symbol of good luck. Moreover, it appears in my name and my birthday, July 14th, which makes it even more meaningful to me.

× I am get a remembering numbers if it's a specific number that is not too long, but often I am not really good at remembering things.

✓ I am good at remembering numbers if it's a specific number that is not too long, but often I am not really good at remembering things.

The phrase 'I am get a remembering numbers' is incorrect because 'am' should be followed by a present participle (-ing form) or an adjective, not a base verb 'get'. The correct expression is 'I am good at remembering numbers'. This error is related to the incorrect use of verb forms and verb + -ing form.

× I suppose that I would not use numbers that much, but in every job I think we have to use numbers at least once.

✓ I suppose that I will not use numbers that much, but in every job I think we have to use numbers at least once.

The use of 'would' here is incorrect because the sentence refers to a future possibility or expectation, so 'will' is more appropriate. 'Would' is often used for hypothetical or conditional situations, but here the speaker is making a prediction about the future, so the modal verb 'will' should be used.

× I do not usually like math, but I do like angles, which is very entertaining and I think angles are very interesting to solve.

✓ I do not usually like math, but I do like angles, which are very entertaining and I think angles are very interesting to solve.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'angles', which is plural, so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to present tense.