Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整，句子未结束，缺少具体例子和细节，且表达略显重复。建议回答时完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并提供具体例子支持观点。

예시: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I major in accounting, which involves working with numbers daily. For example, I often memorize financial figures and statistics for my assignments, which helps me perform well in my studies.

제안: 回答基本完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“well placed well play”表达混乱。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，并注意语法准确。

예시: Definitely, I will use numbers in my future work because as an accountant, I need to analyze financial data and prepare reports every day. Numbers play an essential role in ensuring accuracy and making informed decisions.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但“logistics”用词不当，且缺少具体细节。建议使用更准确的词汇，并补充具体原因或例子。

예시: Absolutely not. I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because I lacked confidence and found calculations challenging. For example, I often struggled with multiplication and division, which made me dislike the subject.

제안: 回答不相关且不完整，未直接回答“哪些数字重要”，且句子中断。建议直接回答问题，提供具体数字及其重要性的解释，避免句子中断。

예시: The numbers that are important to me include my age and height. For instance, I pay attention to my height because I hope to grow taller, and my doctor said I might still grow a little more.

× I major in accounting which requires me a lot of work related to numbers.

✓ I major in accounting which requires me to do a lot of work related to numbers.

动词 require 后面需要接不定式 to do，而不是直接接名词短语。这里缺少了动词不定式，导致句子不完整。建议在 requires 后加上 to do。

× For example, I need to.

✓ For example, I need to work with numbers.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词和宾语，导致表达不清楚。建议补充完整句子，使其表达完整。

× So numbers will be well placed well play an essential role in my daily work.

✓ So numbers will play an essential role in my daily work.

句子中出现了重复和多余的词语，导致句子结构混乱。建议删除多余部分，使句子简洁通顺。

× I didn't enjoy math when I was a child because I'm not confident in math.

✓ I didn't enjoy math when I was a child because I wasn't confident in math.

前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，使用过去时态。时态不一致会导致表达混乱。建议将 am 改为 was。

× I feel that I'm not good at calculating and logistics.

✓ I feel that I'm not good at calculation and logistics.

calculating 是动名词形式，语境中应使用名词 calculation。形容词和名词的使用不当影响表达准确性。建议将 calculating 改为 calculation。

× Like uh, the doctor told me that I could be grow a little, but.

✓ Like uh, the doctor told me that I could grow a little, but.

be grow 是错误的动词搭配，grow 本身是动词，不需要 be。错误使用助动词导致语法错误。建议去掉 be。

× I started.

✓ I started to grow taller.

句子不完整，缺少谓语补充说明动作内容，导致表达不清楚。建议补充完整句子，使其表达完整。