Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: आपके उत्तर में विचार स्पष्ट हैं, लेकिन कुछ वाक्यों में व्याकरणिक त्रुटियाँ हैं जैसे 'a meaningful to me'। आप अपने उत्तर को और अधिक प्राकृतिक बनाने के लिए व्याकरण सुधारें और कुछ लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

예시: Yes, I am quite good at remembering important numbers, especially birthdays and the mobile numbers of my close family members because they are meaningful to me. However, I mainly rely on my smartphone for other contacts and information, as it helps me stay organized and saves time. Therefore, I can avoid forgetting less important numbers.

제안: आपका उत्तर स्पष्ट और संगठित है, लेकिन 'arithmetical skill' के बजाय 'arithmetic skills' अधिक उपयुक्त होगा। आप कुछ और लिंकिंग शब्द जोड़कर उत्तर को और प्रभावी बना सकते हैं।

예시: Yes, definitely. Since I want to pursue studies in data science, using numbers will be essential for my future work because data analysis relies heavily on numerical information. Furthermore, strong logical thinking and good arithmetic skills will help me interpret data accurately and make informed decisions.

제안: आपका उत्तर बहुत अच्छा है, लेकिन 'maths' के बजाय 'math' शब्द का उपयोग करें क्योंकि यह अधिक सामान्य है। आप कुछ और लिंकिंग शब्द जोड़ सकते हैं ताकि उत्तर और भी प्रवाहपूर्ण लगे।

예시: Yes, math was my favorite subject since childhood because I enjoyed solving problems and thinking logically. Additionally, I was always keen to learn new techniques, which helped me develop critical thinking skills and improve my ability to analyze situations. For example, I liked puzzles and brain teasers that challenged me to find solutions step by step.

제안: आपके उत्तर में व्याकरणिक त्रुटियाँ हैं जैसे 'a special meanings' और 'a confidence and motive'। कृपया व्याकरण सुधारें और उत्तर को अधिक प्राकृतिक बनाने के लिए उपयुक्त लिंकिंग शब्दों का उपयोग करें।

예시: Numbers that are very lucky for me, like 3 and 9, are important because they have special meanings in my culture and often bring me good luck. For instance, I always choose these numbers when making important decisions, as they give me confidence and motivation.

× because they are a meaningful to me

✓ because they are meaningful to me

'Meaningful' is an adjective and does not require the article 'a' before it. Using 'a' before an adjective is incorrect. The correct form is 'meaningful to me'.

× strong logical thinking and good arithmetical skill will help me interpret data accurately

✓ strong logical thinking and good arithmetical skills will help me interpret data accurately

'Skill' in this context should be plural 'skills' because it refers to the general ability or multiple abilities. Using singular 'skill' is incorrect here.

× maths was my favorite subject since childhood

✓ math was my favorite subject since childhood

'Math' is the preferred singular form in American English, while 'maths' is British English. Since the rest of the transcript uses American English conventions, 'math' is more appropriate here.

× they have a special meanings in my culture

✓ they have special meanings in my culture

'Meanings' is plural, so the article 'a' (which is singular) should not be used before it. The correct phrase is 'special meanings'.

× they may give me a confidence and motive

✓ they may give me confidence and motivation

'Confidence' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Also, 'motive' (meaning reason) is incorrect here; the intended word is 'motivation', which fits the context better.