Number— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道，如“recording digital quickly”应改为“remembering numbers quickly”。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers. For example, it took me almost a month to memorize the password for my door lock because I find it difficult to recall numbers quickly. Therefore, I often need to practice a lot to improve.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以增加连接词使句子更连贯，如使用“for instance”或“because”。另外，“such as New Zealand and Malaysia”中“and”前应使用逗号。

예시: Yes, absolutely. In the future, I plan to pursue my PhD in another country, for instance, New Zealand or Malaysia. There, I will definitely use numbers to support my data analysis and strengthen my arguments when writing my thesis.

제안: 回答表达了观点和原因，但时态使用不够准确，建议将“feel”改为过去时“felt”，并避免重复“math problem”。同时，增加连接词如“because”使句子更流畅。

예시: No, I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because I wasn't very good at solving problems. For example, I often felt frustrated since I couldn't solve math problems easily.

제안: 回答内容有文化背景介绍，但存在语法错误，如“symbolize”应为“symbolizes”，“reprints”应为“represents”，且最后一句表达不完整。建议注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

예시: In Chinese culture, the numbers 8 and 9 are considered very lucky. For example, the number 8 symbolizes good fortune and wealth, while the number 9 represents longevity and eternity. Because of these meanings, I try to include these numbers in important occasions.

× I always found it challenging to remember numbers, so I have to spend a lot of time practicing.

✓ I have always found it challenging to remember numbers, so I have to spend a lot of time practicing.

句子中使用了过去时态“found”，但前面有“always”表示习惯性动作，应该用现在完成时“have found”来表达从过去到现在的持续状态。

× I'm not good at recording digital quickly.

✓ I'm not good at remembering digits quickly.

“recording digital”用法不当，应该用“remembering digits”表示记住数字；“digital”是形容词，名词应为“digits”。

× such as New Zealand and Malaysia, where I will certainly use numbers to support my data analysis and strengthen my arguments when writing my thesis.

✓ such as New Zealand and Malaysia, where I will certainly use numbers to support my data analyses and strengthen my arguments when writing my thesis.

“data analysis”应为复数形式“data analyses”，因为通常指多次或多种数据分析。

× I often feel frustrated because I couldn't solve the math problem easily.

✓ I often felt frustrated because I couldn't solve math problems easily.

前半句描述过去的感受，应使用过去时“felt”；“math problem”应为复数“math problems”，表示一般情况。

× the number 8 symbolize good fortune and wealth, while the number 9 reprints longevity and eternity.

✓ the number 8 symbolizes good fortune and wealth, while the number 9 represents longevity and eternity.

主语是单数“the number 8”，谓语动词应加-s变为“symbolizes”；“reprints”用词错误，应为“represents”。

× Because those meanings, I'm trying to include these numbers in important.

✓ Because of those meanings, I'm trying to include these numbers in important things.

“Because those meanings”缺少介词，应为“Because of those meanings”；“include these numbers in important”结构不完整，需补充名词“things”使句子完整。