News— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'news as specifically fashion news or political news' and try to use smoother phrasing. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I'm very interested in news, especially fashion and political updates, because I like to stay informed about current events.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and clear about the apps you use. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'and everything.' Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually get my news from the X app or other specific apps. If I need detailed information, I search on Google or use AI tools.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I dislike writing and find it hard to express feelings in writing. I prefer speaking to explain things, so journalism isn't suitable for me.

제안: Good answer with clear explanation and coherence. To improve, avoid informal fillers like 'Yeah' and try to use more varied vocabulary.

예시: No, I haven't had the chance to read the news this morning because I was in a rush. However, I usually catch up on news later when I have more free time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

예시: Yes, I often discuss the news with my friends, especially when major political or global events occur. We share our opinions and sometimes have different viewpoints, which helps us stay informed and understand various perspectives.

× I quite enjoy reading about news as specifically fashion news or political news.

✓ I quite enjoy reading about news, specifically fashion news or political news.

The phrase 'as specifically' is incorrect here; 'specifically' alone is sufficient to specify the types of news. Also, 'news' is uncountable, so no plural form is needed.

× I usually find them in X app or on a specific apps Ann.

✓ I usually find it in the X app or on specific apps, Ann.

The word 'news' is uncountable and singular, so the pronoun should be 'it' not 'them'. Also, 'a specific apps' is incorrect because 'apps' is plural; it should be 'specific apps' without 'a' or 'a specific app' if singular.

× No, I wouldn't like to be journalists becauses I hate writing about something an I have an issue to describe in a feeling.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I hate writing about something and I have an issue describing feelings.

The word 'journalists' is plural but should be singular 'a journalist' to match the subject. 'Becauses' is a typo and should be 'because'. 'An' before 'I' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Describe in a feeling' is awkward; 'describing feelings' is more natural.

× Well, I read it down. Uh, but explain it like Anna speaking way.

✓ Well, I write it down, but explain it like Anna speaking.

The phrase 'read it down' is incorrect; it should be 'write it down'. The conjunction 'but' is used correctly here to contrast the two actions. 'Anna speaking way' is unclear; assuming it means 'in a speaking way' or 'like Anna speaks'.

× Yes, I do talk with my friends about the news quite often, especially when something big happens like an A political issue or in a global event.

✓ Yes, I do talk with my friends about the news quite often, especially when something big happens like a political issue or a global event.

The article 'an' before 'A political issue' is incorrect; it should be 'a political issue'. Also, 'in a global event' should be 'a global event' without 'in' to correctly express the event.

× We usually share our opinion and sometimes even divide different. Points overview.

✓ We usually share our opinions and sometimes even have different points of view.

The phrase 'divide different. Points overview' is ungrammatical and unclear. The correct expression is 'have different points of view' to indicate differing opinions.