News— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“I like, I like”，并且可以更自然地表达对新闻的看法。建议用更丰富的词汇描述自己的兴趣，避免口语化缩写。

예시: No, I'm not very interested in the news because I find it somewhat boring. Instead, I prefer spending my time watching entertaining programs or shows.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the cell phones always buy me”。建议使用连贯的句子并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually find news online because it's more convenient than reading paper newspapers. I often use my smartphone to search for the latest updates.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，并且用连贯的句子表达自己的想法。

예시: No, I don't want to be a journalist because I don't enjoy news and prefer working indoors rather than going outside for work.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“got a sick”，建议使用正确的表达方式，并且避免重复“in this morning”。

예시: No, I haven't read any news this morning because my son was sick, so I went to the hospital to get some medicine for him.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“but but”，表达不够完整。建议用更完整的句子说明是否谈论新闻，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I often chat with my friends online, but we usually talk about our daily lives, like sharing photos and videos of our children, rather than discussing the news.

× I like, I like spending my time programs like shows.

✓ I like spending my time watching programs like shows.

动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式作为宾语，这里应该用'watching'来表示'看节目'。

× I don't like newspapers on paper 'cause it's inconvenient.

✓ I don't like newspapers on paper because they're inconvenient.

'newspapers'是复数，谓语动词也应使用复数形式，这里用复数形式的'are'更合适。

× I like searching something in my cell phones.

✓ I like searching for something on my cell phone.

'search'后面通常接介词'for'表示搜索某物，且'cell phone'应为单数，介词应为'on'表示在手机上。

× It's very convenient and the cell phones always buy me.

✓ It's very convenient and the cell phone always helps me.

'buy me'不符合语境，应改为'helps me'表示手机帮助我。

× I am a person who don't like news, don't like go out for work.

✓ I am a person who doesn't like news and doesn't like going out for work.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用doesn't，且'like go out'应改为'like going out'。

× I like working in in the indoor.

✓ I like working indoors.

'indoor'是形容词，表示室内的，作为副词应使用'indoor s'，且不需要介词'in'。

× No, I haven't read any news in this morning.

✓ No, I haven't read any news this morning.

现在完成时与具体时间状语连用时，不能用'in this morning'，应直接用'this morning'。

× My son got a sick so I went to the hospital to buy some medicine for him in this morning.

✓ My son got sick, so I went to the hospital to buy some medicine for him this morning.

'got a sick'错误，正确表达是'got sick'，且时间状语'this morning'不需要介词'in'。

× Hmm I always talk with my friends online but but we always share our daily lives such as our children, children's photos and videos to each other.

✓ Hmm, I always talk with my friends online, but we always share our daily lives, such as our children’s photos and videos, with each other.

'share ... to each other'错误，正确用法是'share ... with each other'。

× Sometimes I share some.

✓ Sometimes I share some photos or videos.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充具体内容使句子完整。