News— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用更多连接词和多样句式，使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I am very interested in news because it helps me expand my knowledge. Moreover, by reading relevant news, I can stay up to date with current events, which allows me to better understand what's happening around the world.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子不够连贯。建议注意语法正确性，使用连接词，并清晰表达获取新闻的方式。

예시: I usually find the latest news through social media platforms. For example, I use a news app on my phone that notifies me about important events every day.

제안: 回答内容完整，但句子较长且重复“might”，表达略显啰嗦。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I have never thought about becoming a journalist before. However, I don't think I would like to be one because it requires professional knowledge and skills that I currently lack.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且缺少连接词。建议注意语法，使用连接词，并使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I read some celebrity gossip news this morning. Unlike international events, this kind of news is very entertaining and helps me relax.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免口语填充词，注意语法和句子完整性。

예시: No, we rarely talk about the news when we meet. Instead, we usually discuss our personal lives and future plans.

× reading news allows me to expand my knowledge.

✓ Reading news allows me to expand my knowledge.

句首的动名词作为主语时，首字母应大写。

× I can get up to date information through reading relevant news, which really can help me to understand what's going on in the world.

✓ I can get up-to-date information through reading relevant news, which really can help me to understand what's going on in the world.

“up to date”作为形容词短语修饰“information”时，应连写为“up-to-date”。

× I often access to the latest news through social media.

✓ I often access the latest news through social media.

动词“access”后不需要介词“to”，直接加宾语。

× I have a news app every day.

✓ I use a news app every day.

原句时态和表达不正确，应使用一般现在时表达习惯动作。

× This app were informed me to read relevant events.

✓ This app informs me to read relevant events.

主语是单数“app”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“informs”，且“informed”时态错误。

× I never think about this before, but I might not want to be a journalist because being a journalist might require the professional knowledge and skills which I think I currently lack, so I might not be a journalist in the future.

✓ I have never thought about this before, but I might not want to be a journalist because being a journalist might require professional knowledge and skills which I think I currently lack, so I might not be a journalist in the future.

“never think about this before”时态错误，应使用现在完成时“have never thought”。

× I have read some news about celebrities gossips because this kind of news unlike international events, this news is super entertaining which can help me relax.

✓ I have read some news about celebrity gossip because this kind of news, unlike international events, is super entertaining and can help me relax.

“celebrities gossips”应为不可数名词“celebrity gossip”；句子结构需调整，添加逗号和连接词使句意清晰。

× No, we hardly ever talk any news because when we gather together we often umm, discuss our personal events or future plans.

✓ No, we hardly ever talk about the news because when we gather together we often, umm, discuss our personal events or future plans.

“talk any news”表达错误，应为“talk about the news”。

× We almost share lot of things such as secret but we really.

✓ We almost share a lot of things such as secrets, but we really don't talk about them.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，且“lot”前应加冠词“a”，“secret”应为复数“secrets”。