News— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达，如“news”和“information”重复。句子结构应更清晰，避免语法错误。建议用一两句直接表达兴趣程度，再用具体细节支持。

예시: I'm not very interested in news in general, but I do follow financial and investment news daily because it's important for my career in the industry.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和单复数。内容应更具体，说明使用这些app的原因和频率。

예시: I usually get news from apps like CNBC and Bloomberg because they provide timely international coverage, which I trust more than local news.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和句子结构有误。建议先直接回答，再用具体原因支持，使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

예시: I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it's a demanding job that requires traveling to many places, including rural areas, and it often pays poorly in my country.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地描述新闻内容，避免重复词汇，使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: Yes, I read the news this morning on the CNBC app. It mainly reported that tech companies like Meta had strong financial results, which caused their stock prices to rise.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体细节支持，避免口语填充词，保持句子完整。

예시: I seldom talk about the news with my friends because it feels too formal. Instead, we usually chat about movies, celebrities, and sports in a relaxed way.

× It's a really important information for me.

✓ It's really important information for me.

information 是不可数名词，前面不加冠词 a。

× I have download several app which is related to international news like CNBC, Bloomberg so I can follow the news immediately and as soon as they they send the coverage and also that in our country the news is not convincing so I watch internationally.

✓ I have downloaded several apps which are related to international news like CNBC, Bloomberg so I can follow the news immediately as soon as they send the coverage. Also, in our country the news is not convincing so I watch internationally.

have download 应为现在完成时，动词需用过去分词 downloaded；app 应用复数 apps；which 指代复数 apps，谓语动词用 are。

× I have download several app which is related to international news like CNBC, Bloomberg so I can follow the news immediately and as soon as they they send the coverage and also that in our country the news is not convincing so I watch internationally.

✓ I have downloaded several apps which are related to international news like CNBC, Bloomberg so I can follow the news immediately as soon as they send the coverage. Also, in our country the news is not convincing so I watch internationally.

app 应用复数 apps，谓语动词与复数主语保持一致用 are。

× I would not like to be a journalist because that I know a journalist is a really hard job.

✓ I would not like to be a journalist because I know a journalist's job is really hard.

句子结构不完整，且表达不自然，改为更通顺的表达。

× You need to go to every place and especially like some place like rural place that I can.

✓ You need to go to every place, especially some rural places that I can.

表达不清晰，去掉多余的 like，调整语序使句子通顺。

× Also that journalist in our country is low paid.

✓ Also, journalists in our country are low paid.

journalist 应用复数形式 journalists，谓语动词与复数主语保持一致用 are。

× Yes, I have read the news this morning and CNBC app and it mainly focus on the report that the tech, tech knowledge enterprise like Meta, Meta and others enterprise that they have a good financial result which contributed jump in the stock.

✓ Yes, I have read the news this morning on the CNBC app and it mainly focuses on reports about tech knowledge enterprises like Meta and others that have good financial results which contributed to a jump in the stock.

focus 应用第三人称单数形式 focuses；enterprise 应用复数 enterprises；contributed 后需加介词 to；句子结构调整使表达更准确。

× Yes, I have read the news this morning and CNBC app and it mainly focus on the report that the tech, tech knowledge enterprise like Meta, Meta and others enterprise that they have a good financial result which contributed jump in the stock.

✓ Yes, I have read the news this morning on the CNBC app and it mainly focuses on reports about tech knowledge enterprises like Meta and others that have good financial results which contributed to a jump in the stock.

介词 on 用于表示在某个应用或平台上阅读新闻；about 用于介绍报道的内容。

× All I seldom because like talking about the news is like some formal topics, but usually I hang out with my friends.

✓ I seldom talk about the news because it is a formal topic, but usually I hang out with my friends.

副词 seldom 应放在动词前；句子结构调整使表达更自然。

× We have a really chill, relaxed talks which may focus on other gossips in uh, in the movie stars for example.

✓ We have really chill, relaxed talks which may focus on other gossip, for example, about movie stars.

talks 是复数，前面不加冠词 a；gossip 是不可数名词，不用复数形式；调整句子使表达更准确。

× Also we talk about our interesting views like sports and.

✓ Also, we talk about our interesting views like sports and so on.

句子不完整，补充完整表达。