News— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan kata pengisi seperti 'uh' yang berlebihan dan buat kalimat lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan langsung ke poin utama tanpa pengulangan yang tidak perlu.

예시: Yes, I am interested in news. Every morning, I read news from CNN or BBC to stay updated on current trends and to practice my English reading skills.

제안: Hindari pengulangan kata dan kata pengisi seperti 'uh'. Lengkapi kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan struktur yang lebih alami dan efektif.

예시: I usually find news on the Internet by visiting websites like CNN, BBC, or CNBC because it's convenient and up-to-date.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak tepat seperti 'never interest' dan gunakan linking words dengan benar.

예시: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I am comfortable with my current job as a banker. However, I enjoy reading news and listening to podcasts.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan hindari pengulangan kata. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan struktur yang benar.

예시: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was late getting up and had to rush to work.

제안: Kurangi penggunaan kata pengisi dan perbaiki tata bahasa. Gunakan linking words yang tepat untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan alami.

예시: Actually, I don't often talk about the news with my friends. However, when there is breaking or surprising news, I usually discuss it with my friends and sometimes with my bosses.

× on the morning I always, uh, read some news

✓ in the morning I always, uh, read some news

The correct preposition to use with 'morning' when referring to a general time of day is 'in', not 'on'. 'On' is used for specific days or dates, e.g., 'on Monday'.

× maybe from CNN or for BBC to get update on the current trend

✓ maybe from CNN or from BBC to get updates on the current trend

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; 'from' should be used to indicate the source of news. Also, 'update' should be plural 'updates' to match the context of ongoing information.

× I usually find news in on the Internet from the website of CNN, uh, BBC or sometimes CNBC.

✓ I usually find news on the Internet from the websites of CNN, BBC, or sometimes CNBC.

The correct preposition with 'Internet' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'website' should be plural 'websites' because multiple sources are mentioned.

× I never interest on journalism since I was a kid.

✓ I have never been interested in journalism since I was a kid.

The verb 'interest' requires the structure 'be interested in' to express liking something. Also, the tense should be present perfect to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.

× No, I hadn't because I, I have to rush in going to my workplace, uh, because I kind of late in getting up at this morning and so I hadn't read news.

✓ No, I hadn't because I had to rush to my workplace, uh, because I was kind of late getting up this morning, so I hadn't read the news.

The past perfect 'hadn't' is used incorrectly; it should be 'hadn't read the news'. 'Rush in going' is incorrect; 'rush to' is correct. 'Kind of late in getting up at this morning' should be 'was kind of late getting up this morning'. Also, 'the news' requires the definite article.

× I usually talk to my friend to discuss about it

✓ I usually talk to my friend to discuss it

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect; just 'discuss' is sufficient.

× I usually talk to my friend to discuss about it and I also sometimes talk to my bosses.

✓ I usually talk to my friends to discuss it and I also sometimes talk to my bosses.

Since the speaker refers to multiple bosses, it is consistent to use 'friends' in plural form as well, especially when discussing general habits.