Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share because they believe it helps build strong relationships and makes me feel happy when I share things with others.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I usually share my problems about daily life, studies, or work with my friends. They encourage me and share their experiences, which makes me feel happy and supported.

제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến cá nhân một cách rõ ràng.

예시: I prefer not to share personal information about my family because I value their privacy and feel it's a private matter.

제안: Câu trả lời rất khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng chính xác để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình.

예시: No, I don't think more people will share cars because cars are expensive and valuable, so many people prefer to keep their own vehicles.

× my parents own way encouraged me to say with all these

✓ my parents in their own way encouraged me to say all these

The phrase 'own way' needs a possessive determiner 'their' to correctly modify 'own way'. Also, 'with all these' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'say all these' is more appropriate. This corrects the singular/plural possessive usage and sentence clarity.

× I think is have a appear strong relation safe an that risk and sky with others and very happy when I'm sharing about anything with all those

✓ I think I have a strong and safe relationship with others and I am very happy when I'm sharing anything with them

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks a subject 'I' before 'have', misuses 'appear', and has unclear phrases like 'risk and sky'. The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× I usually serve with my friends

✓ I usually share with my friends

The verb 'serve' is incorrect in this context; 'share' is the appropriate verb. Also, 'serve with' is not a correct collocation here. The correction uses the correct verb to express the intended meaning.

× They usually give me a price up and share experience for me about 3 or work

✓ They usually give me praise and share their experiences with me about study or work

The phrase 'a price up' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'praise'. Also, 'share experience for me about 3 or work' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction uses appropriate quantifiers and clearer expressions.

× I'm very happy and.

✓ I'm very happy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. The correction removes the incomplete conjunction to form a complete sentence.

× Oh I think I'm refre not to say about my family, especially some. Come please.

✓ Oh I think I prefer not to talk about my family, especially some things.

'refre' is a misspelling of 'prefer'. 'not to say about' is incorrect; 'not to talk about' is more natural. 'some. Come please.' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'some things' for clarity.

× Alright, anything about family and I don't want to share with others. I just uh. I just give myself an A. So.

✓ Alright, anything about my family I don't want to share with others. I just keep it to myself.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'I just give myself an A' is nonsensical in context. The correction provides a coherent sentence expressing the intended meaning.

× Oh no, I think I don't. I don't think people more people will share cars because a cry is a cry such a pig value have a big value.

✓ Oh no, I don't think more people will share cars because a car is very valuable.

The phrase 'a cry is a cry such a pig value have a big value' is nonsensical and likely a mishearing or typo. Corrected to 'a car is very valuable' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So I think more people will shy to share cause with ordering an.

✓ So I think more people will be shy to share cars with others.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'shy to share cause with ordering an' is incorrect. The correction provides a grammatically correct and clear sentence.