Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议加强语法基础，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share with my sister and brother when I was young because they believed sharing would help me develop cooperation skills for the future.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不自然，存在语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，提升表达的流畅性。

예시: I usually share gifts, snacks, and interesting books with my friends when I travel to different cities because I want to share my experiences with them.

제안: 回答较为简单，语法有误，建议丰富内容，使用更准确的语法结构，并适当增加细节使回答更具体。

예시: Actually, I don't mind sharing most things with my close friends and family because we trust each other and have a strong bond.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，提升表达的清晰度和逻辑性。

예시: I don't think many people will share their cars because cars are personal belongings, and owners may worry about the safety and responsibility when lending them to others.

× They hope I can have the spirit that sharing with other and that can make me more collaborate with others in the future.

✓ They hope I can have the spirit of sharing with others and that can make me collaborate more with others in the future.

这里的'spirit that sharing with other'中，'other'应为复数形式'others'，表示其他人；'more collaborate'中，'collaborate'应为动词，前面需要副词修饰，改为'collaborate more'。这是单复数和词序问题。

× When traveling with this city, I will book some gifts for them and share some snacks and some interesting book I found to them.

✓ When traveling in this city, I will buy some gifts for them and share some snacks and some interesting books I found with them.

'traveling with this city'应为'traveling in this city'，表示在某城市旅行；'book'应为复数'books'；'share ... to them'应为'share ... with them'，介词使用错误。

× share some snacks and some interesting book I found to them.

✓ share some snacks and some interesting books I found with them.

'book'应为复数'books'，因为前面用了'some'表示复数。

× Actually, no. I think I'm the person who are willing to share things with others, especially to my close friend and my parents.

✓ Actually, no. I think I'm the person who is willing to share things with others, especially my close friends and my parents.

'person who are'应为'person who is'，主谓一致；'close friend'应为复数'close friends'，因为通常指多个朋友。

× especially to my close friend and my parents.

✓ especially my close friends and my parents.

'especially to'中' to'不需要，直接用'espescially'后接宾语即可。

× I think for most of people the car is the privacy belongs themselves and they are unwilling to share the cards because if they share their cards it means they need to make sure the lender safe.

✓ I think for most people the car is private property belonging to themselves and they are unwilling to share the cars because if they share their cars it means they need to make sure the lender is safe.

'most of people'应为'most people'；'the privacy belongs themselves'表达不当，改为'private property belonging to themselves'；'cards'应为'cars'，前后保持一致；'make sure the lender safe'缺少动词，改为'make sure the lender is safe'。