Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“taunt me”用词不当，且句子结构不完整。建议简化表达，避免冗余，保持句子连贯。

예시: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share when I was young because it helps build friendships and teaches empathy. I still remember their advice clearly.

제안: 回答内容较好，但重复使用“with each other”显得冗余。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: I usually share secrets with my close friends, which strengthens our trust. With other friends, we often share meals or snacks to enjoy our time together.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“underwears”应为“underwear”，且表达不够自然。建议注意单复数和时态，简洁表达观点。

예시: I prefer not to share personal clothes like underwear because it can be unhygienic and may cause illness.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用连接词，表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I believe car-sharing will become more popular because people are increasingly aware of environmental issues and want to save money.

× They I still remember.

✓ I still remember them.

原句中“They I still remember.”语序混乱，主语和宾语位置错误。正确表达应为“I still remember them.”，即主语+谓语+宾语的正常语序。

× They taunt me.

✓ They taunted me.

句子描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式。原句中“taunt”是现在时，需改为过去式“taunted”。

× Sharing not only helps build connections but also teaches me empathy.

✓ Sharing not only helps build connections but also teaches me empathy.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× For close friends, it's very common for us to share secrets with each other, which helps us to build a strong commitment with each other.

✓ For close friends, it's very common for us to share secrets with each other, which helps us build a strong commitment to each other.

“commitment”后应使用介词“to”表示“对……的承诺”，且“helps us to build”中“to”可省略，改为“helps us build”更自然。

× For normal friends, we often share dinners or food with each other.

✓ With normal friends, we often share dinners or food with each other.

“For normal friends”表达不太自然，改为“With normal friends”更符合英语习惯。

× I'm not a big fan of sharing personal outfits, especially personal underwears.

✓ I'm not a big fan of sharing personal outfits, especially personal underwear.

“underwear”是不可数名词，无复数形式，不能加“s”。

× Sharing this kind of clothes makes me concerned about the hygiene and I might got get sick after sharing this kind of clothes.

✓ Sharing this kind of clothes makes me concerned about hygiene, and I might get sick after sharing these kinds of clothes.

“hygiene”前不加冠词；“might got get”错误，应为“might get”；“this kind of clothes”应改为“these kinds of clothes”以匹配复数名词。

× Sharing this kind of clothes makes me concerned about the hygiene and I might got get sick after sharing this kind of clothes.

✓ Sharing this kind of clothing makes me concerned about hygiene, and I might get sick after sharing this kind of clothing.

“clothes”是复数名词，搭配“this kind of”时应使用不可数名词“clothing”更合适。

× Yes, the way I see it, cost sharing scheme will be very popular in the long run because nowadays people are more and more environmentally conscious which means they care more about environmental friendly nowadays sharing.

✓ Yes, the way I see it, cost-sharing schemes will be very popular in the long run because nowadays people are more and more environmentally conscious, which means they care more about environmentally friendly sharing.

“cost sharing scheme”应为复数“cost-sharing schemes”；“environmental friendly”应为副词形式“environmentally friendly”；句子缺少逗号分隔定语从句，且“nowadays”重复使用，需删去多余的“nowadays”。