Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议使用更自然流畅的表达方式，并注意句子完整性和连贯性。

예시: Yes, my parents often encourage me to share because they believe it's important to balance my own needs with helping others. However, they also respect my choice whether to share or not.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，细节描述不够具体。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语化的填充词，并提供更具体的细节。

예시: I usually share my food with my friends. For example, once during class, I noticed a classmate looked hungry, so I offered him some snacks, which made him very happy because he didn't have to feel hungry.

제안: 回答内容较为完整，但句子结构重复，表达略显笨拙。建议使用更简洁自然的句式，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer not to share personal items like my phone, laptop, or iPad because they contain a lot of private information and social media accounts. I don't like others to use my phone without my permission.

제안: 回答结构清晰，但表达稍显简单，缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议使用连接词增强逻辑性，并丰富内容细节。

예시: I think whether people share cars depends on their age and situation. For instance, college students who have a driver's license often can't afford a car, so they might share rides. However, adults with families usually own cars because it's more convenient for commuting and traveling.

× Sometimes they encourage me to share.

✓ Sometimes they encouraged me to share.

这里描述的是过去父母的行为，应该使用过去时态encouraged，而不是现在时态encourage。

× Depends on I want to share, not just they told me to share.

✓ It depends on whether I want to share, not just that they told me to share.

句子缺少主语和连接词，且表达不完整。应加上主语it和连接词whether，使句子完整且符合英语表达习惯。

× my classmates stomachs were growing during the class time

✓ my classmate's stomach was growling during class time

这里指的是单个同学的肚子，应该用单数classmate's和stomach，且肚子发出声音用growling而非growing。

× my classmates stomachs were growing during the class time

✓ my classmate's stomach was growling during class time

动词grow的-ing形式growling表示肚子咕咕叫，更符合语境。

× So I shared my snacks to him and he's happy because he will not be hungry.

✓ So I shared my snacks with him and he was happy because he was not hungry anymore.

动词share后应接介词with而非to；时态应保持一致，描述过去发生的事情用过去时。

× I think this depends on how old they are.

✓ I think this depends on how old they are.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× If they're just college students that have the driver license, I think they are not able to own a car.

✓ If they're just college students who have a driver's license, I think they are not able to own a car.

driver license应为driver's license，且关系代词用who更合适。

× I don't like people touch my phone without my permission.

✓ I don't like people touching my phone without my permission.

动词like后接动名词形式touching，而非原形动词touch。