Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“shared thing”应为“sharing things”，“make”应为“made”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: Yes, definitely. My parents always taught me the importance of sharing with others when I was a child. For example, my mother used to bake homemade cookies and asked me to give some to our neighbors. She said sharing food shows that you care about others.

제안: 回答中有重复表达“Well, I always share”，且“accommodation”用词不当。建议避免重复，选择更准确的词汇，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I like to share snacks with my classmates. In addition, I often share music and interesting news articles because I believe these help strengthen my friendships and build emotional connections.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“toothpaste are not is not suitable share”，且表达不够准确。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的短语，并具体说明原因。

예시: I think personal items like toothpaste are not suitable to share because of hygiene reasons. Also, private things such as social media accounts, passports, or family secrets should not be shared to respect privacy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“share my bestie Lucy, a really useful language learning apps”，且“ILS”应为“IELTS”。建议注意语法和词汇准确性，表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, recently I shared a useful language learning app with my best friend Lucy because we are both preparing for the IELTS exam this year. I believe this app can help us improve our speaking, writing, and listening skills.

제안: 回答语法混乱，句子不完整，且代词使用错误（“to him”应为“to her”）。建议理清句子结构，使用完整句子表达清楚意思。

예시: I would definitely share good news with my mom first. For example, if I pass an important exam, I would message her immediately because she is my biggest supporter in life.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“re relationship”、“fooded”，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确词汇，避免拼写错误，并使句子更流畅。

예시: I often share gossip news with my friends, such as updates about celebrities' relationships because we are both interested in that. Besides, we also share news about new snacks since we both love food and pay attention to new products.

× My parent always taught me the significance of shared thing with other people since I was a little girl.

✓ My parents always taught me the significance of sharing things with other people since I was a little girl.

“parent”应为复数形式“parents”，因为指的是父母双方；“shared thing”应改为“sharing things”，表示分享的事情，且“thing”应为复数形式。

× I still remember my mom always make homemade cookie and asking me to send a box to our neighbor.

✓ I still remember my mom always making homemade cookies and asking me to send a box to our neighbor.

“mom”作为第三人称单数，谓语动词应为“makes”，但此处用“always make”不正确，改为动名词“making”更合适；“cookie”应为复数“cookies”，表示多块饼干。

× She always said sharing food means you are care so I think.

✓ She always said sharing food means you care, so I think so.

“you are care”中“care”应为动词，去掉“are”；句末缺少“so”使句子完整。

× Well, I always share snacks with my classmates. Besides, I often share some small things like music, accommodation or interesting news article.

✓ Well, I always share snacks with my classmates. Besides, I often share some small things like music, accommodation, or interesting news articles.

“news article”应为复数“news articles”，表示多篇新闻文章。

× Oh, I think some private thing like toothpaste are not is not suitable share because of hygiene reason.

✓ Oh, I think some private things like toothpaste are not suitable to share because of hygiene reasons.

“thing”应为复数“things”；“are not is not”重复，应删去“is not”；“suitable share”应为“suitable to share”；“reason”应为复数“reasons”。

× Besides, I also think some social media, passport or some secrets about your family or friend is not suitable share.

✓ Besides, I also think some social media, passports, or some secrets about your family or friends are not suitable to share.

“passport”应为复数“passports”；“friend”应为复数“friends”；主语为复数，谓语动词应为“are”；“suitable share”应为“suitable to share”。

× My mom definitely if I have some good news such as I pass a significant exam, I must send message first time firstly to him because she is my biggest supporter in in my good life so I so she's my.

✓ My mom definitely. If I have some good news, such as passing a significant exam, I must send a message to her first because she is my biggest supporter in my life.

“send message”应为“send a message”；“to him”应为“to her”，因为指的是妈妈；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整顺序。

× Wow, I often share some gossipy news with my friend like some famous people's re relationship, we both interested about it.

✓ Wow, I often share some gossipy news with my friends, like some famous people's relationships; we are both interested in it.

“friend”应为复数“friends”；“re relationship”应为“relationships”；“interested about”应为“interested in”。

× Besides, I also share some snacks new with my friend because we both are fooded so we pay very attention to some snacks.

✓ Besides, I also share some new snacks with my friends because we both love food, so we pay a lot of attention to snacks.

“snacks new”词序错误，应为“new snacks”；“friend”应为复数“friends”；“fooded”错误，应为“love food”；“pay very attention”应为“pay a lot of attention”。