Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在重复用词（"excellent, excellent"）和语法小错误（"my friend I played with"应为"my friends I played with"或"the friend I played with"）。建议注意避免重复词汇，改进句子结构，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my mother always encouraged me to share food and toys with my friends when I was a child because she believed sharing helps build strong friendships.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（"I enjoying"应为"I enjoy"），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意语法正确性，避免句子中断，完整表达观点。

예시: I enjoy sharing delicious food I've discovered, exciting news, and recommendations for good restaurants with my friends and family because it brings us closer.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多（"I supposed"应为"I suppose"，"feel unfavorable"应为"feel uncomfortable"，"I want to sharing"应为"I don't want to share"），表达不够清晰。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: I suppose that I wouldn't feel comfortable sharing expensive items like my laptop or camera, even with close friends. Also, I prefer not to share my private information with others.

제안: 回答内容不够清晰，语法和用词错误较多（"successed"应为"succeeded"，句子结构混乱），且缺乏连贯性。建议练习清晰表达事件的过程和结果，使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: Yesterday, I gave a presentation about SAP technical skills, which helped solve a security issue. As a result, my colleague successfully downloaded the report.

제안: 回答中填充词较多（"umm", "uh"），影响流畅度。建议减少口头语，简洁表达原因和细节，使回答更自然。

예시: I would share good news with my husband first because I trust him a lot, and he often helps me solve problems quickly.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误（"small vans"应为"small wins"），语法不准确，表达不清晰。建议注意词汇准确性，简化句子结构，清楚表达观点。

예시: I usually share live updates, travel plans, small wins at work or study, and recommendations with my friends. However, I avoid sharing sensitive information in group chats.

× My mother always taught me to share food and toys with my friend I played with when I was young.

✓ My mother always taught me to share food and toys with my friends I played with when I was young.

这里“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常童年玩伴不止一个，且句意暗示多个朋友。单复数错误属于单复数问题。

× I enjoying sharing all sorts of good things with my friend and family This include delicious food I have discovered, exciting news or some good restaurant because I think the.

✓ I enjoy sharing all sorts of good things with my friends and family. This includes delicious food I have discovered, exciting news, or some good restaurants because I think so.

“I enjoying”应为“I enjoy”，动词形式错误；“friend”应为复数“friends”；“This include”应为“This includes”，主谓一致；“restaurant”应为复数“restaurants”。这些均属于单复数和主谓一致问题。

× I supposed that if I have something expensive like a laptop or camera, I would feel unfavorable sharing it even my close friends.

✓ I suppose that if I have something expensive like a laptop or camera, I would feel unfavorable sharing it even with my close friends.

“I supposed”应为现在时“I suppose”，因为表达的是一般情况；“even my close friends”缺少介词“with”，属于介词使用错误。

× And besides, I want to sharing my private information with others.

✓ And besides, I don't want to share my private information with others.

“want to sharing”结构错误，动词“want”后应接动词原形“share”，且句意应是否定，需加“don't”。

× Yesterday I gave the presentation of the technical skills of SAP and it resolved the hacking point, and finally she successed the download report.

✓ Yesterday I gave a presentation on the technical skills of SAP, and it resolved the hacking issue, and finally she succeeded in downloading the report.

“gave the presentation”前应加不定冠词“a presentation”；“resolved the hacking point”表达不准确，改为“resolved the hacking issue”；“successed”拼写错误，应为“succeeded”；“the download report”应改为“downloading the report”，动名词形式。

× and finally she successed the download report.

✓ and finally she succeeded in downloading the report.

“she”指代不明，且动词“succeeded”后应接介词“in”加动名词，原句结构错误。

× if I meet some uh, problem that I can't resolve it as soon as possible, he will give me a resolution.

✓ if I meet some problem that I can't resolve as soon as possible, he will give me a resolution.

“that I can't resolve it”中“it”多余，关系从句中不需要重复宾语。

× Uh, mostly live updates, travel plans, small vans at work or study, and the recommendations.

✓ Uh, mostly live updates, travel plans, small wins at work or study, and recommendations.

“small vans”应为“small wins”，原词拼写错误且语义不符；“the recommendations”中“the”可省略，且“recommendations”应为复数。

× I avoid sharing anything to prevent or sensitive in Group chat.

✓ I avoid sharing anything that is private or sensitive in group chats.

“to prevent or sensitive”结构错误，应改为“that is private or sensitive”；“Group chat”应为复数“group chats”，且首字母小写。