Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, definitely. When I was little, my parents taught me to share with others. For example, when I went to kindergarten, they would give me some snacks and remind me to share them with my classmates. It really helps me to make friends more easily.
시험관
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
수험생
I prefer sharing interesting short video clips with my friends, especially when we have common hobbies. Besides, I also like to share snacks with my classmates. You know, it's small thing but it can make people feel closer.
시험관
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
수험생
I think some private things should not be shared like my phone and my laptop because there are a lot of private stuff inside. Besides, I would not share my terrible experience because I don't want to bring up.
시험관
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
수험생
Yes actually I recently shared a lemon hand cream with my friend. I liked it because the texture was light, not greasy at all, and it smelled amazing. She tried it and loved it so I felt happy.
시험관
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
수험생
Absolutely my mother, she is my best friend. We usually talk about all kinds of things and she always supports me, Different opinions and choices. So when I have good news I definitely tell her first.
시험관
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
수험생
Oh, maybe various kinds of news I'd like to share with my friends. For example, some gossip, anecdotes, and some little stories about people around us.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did your parents teach you to share when you were a child?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答较自然且内容完整，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“share with others”和“share them with my classmates”。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: Yes, definitely. When I was little, my parents taught me to share, especially snacks at kindergarten, which helped me make friends more easily.
What kind of things do you like to share with others?
점수: 88.0제안: 回答内容具体且自然，但“you know”口语化较强，建议用更正式的表达替代。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。
예시: I enjoy sharing interesting short video clips with friends who share my hobbies. Additionally, I like to share snacks with classmates because small gestures can bring people closer.
What kind of things are not suitable for sharing?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答表达有些不够流畅，‘terrible experience’表达不够具体，且‘bring up’用法不准确。建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达。
예시: I believe private items like my phone and laptop shouldn't be shared due to personal information. Also, I prefer not to share unpleasant experiences to avoid negative feelings.
Do you have anything to share with others recently?
점수: 90.0제안: 回答具体且自然，表达清晰。可以稍作调整使句子更紧凑，避免重复“liked it”和“loved it”。
예시: Yes, I recently shared a lemon hand cream with a friend. Its light texture and pleasant scent impressed both of us, which made me very happy.
Who is the first person you would like to share good news with?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯，如‘Different opinions and choices’不完整。建议改进句子结构，确保逻辑清晰。
예시: Absolutely my mother, who is my best friend. We often discuss various topics, and she always supports my decisions. Therefore, I share good news with her first.
What kind of news do you share with your friends?
점수: 85.0제안: 回答内容丰富，但开头‘Oh, maybe’显得不够自信，建议直接陈述。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
예시: I like to share various kinds of news with my friends, such as gossip, anecdotes, and small stories about people around us.
문법
× I don't want to bring up.
✓ I don't want to bring it up.
这里缺少宾语，动词短语 'bring up' 需要一个宾语，表示 '提起某事'。应加上宾语 'it'。
× Different opinions and choices.
✓ We have different opinions and choices.
该句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整句子，使其成为完整陈述句。
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