Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，且最后一句话与问题无关，建议回答时紧扣问题，避免无关内容，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, my parents always taught me to share my belongings with friends because it helps build good relationships.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: I like to share interesting news and stories with my parents and friends, especially when I was a student.

제안: 回答语法混乱且内容不完整，建议明确表达观点，使用完整句子，并举具体例子说明。

예시: In my opinion, personal and sensitive information should not be shared. For example, my friend Julia didn't want to share her exam results.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误，建议完整表达想法，注意时态和句子结构，避免句子中断。

예시: Yes, I shared some good news with my best friend Julia yesterday because I bought a beautiful dress at the supermarket.

제안: 回答表达不流畅且语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子，清晰表达原因，并避免重复。

예시: I would share good news with my best friend first because we have a close relationship and always support each other.

제안: 回答语法错误多且表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明分享的新闻类型，并注意语法和逻辑。

예시: I share both good and bad news with my best friends because we have a close friendship and support each other.

× And is there a good way to con stay connections?

✓ And is there a good way to stay connected?

原句中“con stay connections”结构不正确，应该使用动词不定式“to stay”加形容词“connected”来表达保持联系的意思。建议使用“to stay connected”来表达保持联系。

× and I sure interesting news with my parents and friends.

✓ and I shared interesting news with my parents and friends.

原句中“sure”应为“shared”的误拼，且时态应为过去时，因为描述过去的动作。建议使用过去式“shared”来表达过去分享的动作。

× Why in my opinion is not suitable to share things such as personals and sensitive things.

✓ In my opinion, it is not suitable to share things such as personal and sensitive matters.

原句语序混乱，且“personals”用词不当，应为形容词“personal”，且“things”后应具体化为“matters”。建议调整语序并使用正确词汇。

× my friend Julia didn't pass important.

✓ my friend Julia didn't pass an important exam.

原句缺少宾语，且“important”应为形容词修饰名词，需补充具体名词如“exam”。建议补充完整句子使其语义完整。

× Yesterday I share a happy thing with my best friend Julia because I got a beautiful dress in the supermarket and what's more, I.

✓ Yesterday I shared a happy thing with my best friend Julia because I got a beautiful dress in the supermarket.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式“shared”，且句子末尾不完整，应去掉多余部分。建议使用过去式并保持句子完整。

× Well, I would share something with my best friends firstly because we have a very close relationship and our support with each other for example, and everything positive happens.

✓ Well, I would share something with my best friends first because we have a very close relationship and support each other, for example, whenever something positive happens.

“firstly”位置不当，通常放在动词前；“our support with each other”表达不自然，应为“support each other”；句子结构混乱，需调整顺序和连接词。建议调整副词位置和句子结构。

× Well, one of the things is good or bad I would like to share with my best friends because we have a closer friendship and support with support each other when I made bad things they must inquire.

✓ Well, whether the news is good or bad, I would like to share it with my best friends because we have a close friendship and support each other. When I have problems, they always inquire about me.

原句中“support with support each other”重复且用法错误，应为“support each other”；“when I made bad things”表达不当，应为“when I have problems”；句子结构混乱，需分句表达。建议调整介词用法和句子结构，使表达清晰。