Sharing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，且句子结构较为简单，建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, my parents taught me to share when I was a child because they believed it was an important quality. They often set a good example by sharing with others themselves.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I like to share books with others because my friends and I have similar tastes. Sharing books helps us discuss our thoughts and feelings about them, which is really enjoyable.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但句子较短且缺少连接词，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富内容。

예시: I believe some things, like personal secrets, are not suitable for sharing because everyone has the right to privacy and should keep certain matters confidential.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议注意句子结构和词汇使用，避免模糊表达。

예시: Recently, I shared a book called 'Leeches in Chang'an' with my friend. Since we both enjoy similar literature, we had interesting discussions about it.

제안: 回答内容混乱且语法错误严重，建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子直接回答问题。

예시: The first person I would like to share good news with is my parents because they always support me and we have close communication.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，句子结构不完整，建议使用更自然的表达方式并补充细节。

예시: My friends and I both like table tennis, so we often share the results of competitions and discuss our performances.

× Yes, it's a great personality that we must own.

✓ Yes, it's a great personality trait that we must own.

这里 personality 应该用复数形式 personality traits，表示个性特征的复数，但为了保持句意，改为 personality trait 单数形式更合适。

× So our parent would always teach us this personalities and they would do something to make model for me.

✓ So our parents would always teach us these personalities and they would do something to be a model for me.

parent 应该用复数 parents，personalities 前的指示代词应为 these，且短语 'make model for me' 不正确，改为 'be a model for me' 更合适。

× I would like to share with others about books most because my friends and I are always have the similar taste of books, so sharing books can help us express our thinking and feeling about the book.

✓ I would like to share books with others most because my friends and I always have similar tastes in books, so sharing books can help us express our thoughts and feelings about the books.

'share with others about books' 应改为 'share books with others'，'are always have' 是错误的动词搭配，应为 'always have'，'taste' 应用复数 'tastes'，'thinking and feeling' 应用复数形式 'thoughts and feelings'。

× my friends and I are always have the similar taste of books

✓ my friends and I always have similar tastes in books

'are always have' 是错误的时态搭配，应去掉 'are'，改为 'always have'。

× I shared a book with my friend which called Leeches in Chang'an.

✓ I shared a book with my friend which is called Leeches in Chang'an.

定语从句中缺少系动词 'is'，应为 'which is called'。

× My friend and I have the similar taste in the literature, so when I read this book, she failed.

✓ My friend and I have similar tastes in literature, so when I read this book, she liked it.

'the similar taste' 应去掉定冠词 'the'，'literature' 不用加定冠词，'she failed' 语义不明，推测应为 'she liked it'。

× The third person I would share firstly is must must be my parents because they always feel the same, same for me and we always have endless talks.

✓ The first person I would share with is definitely my parents because they always feel the same as me and we always have endless talks.

'third person' 应为 'first person'，'must must be' 重复且不合适，改为 'definitely'，'feel the same, same for me' 语法错误，改为 'feel the same as me'。

× My friend and I are both like table tennis, so the competition outcomes would always be in the least that we share with each other.

✓ My friend and I both like table tennis, so the competition outcomes are always the least that we share with each other.

'are both like' 应为 'both like'，'would always be in the least' 语法错误，改为 'are always the least'。