Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding one or two supporting details. Also, avoid redundancy and unclear words like 'Richards'.

예시: I often watch movies after finishing my long workday. I usually relax in bed with some popcorn and turn off the lights, which helps me enjoy the movie more.

제안: Your answer has some unclear words and repetition. Try to use clear vocabulary and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually watch comedy movies because they cheer me up and help me relieve stress after a long day at work. Therefore, I really enjoy this genre.

제안: Your answer has many repetitions and unclear phrases like 'Add whatever disable you can'. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating words and make your sentences coherent with linking words.

예시: I prefer watching movies at home because I can sit in any position I like and laugh freely without worrying about others. This makes me feel more comfortable than going to the cinema.

제안: Your answer is good but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and smoother linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I find watching movies in other languages very useful. For example, watching English movies has helped me improve my language skills, so I prefer them over movies in my mother tongue.

× A frequently watch movies after completing my long working hours, I sit in my bed and start watching a movie with a popcorn in my hand an lights turned off which I really enjoy and makes me Richards.

✓ I frequently watch movies after completing my long working hours. I sit in my bed and start watching a movie with popcorn in my hand and the lights turned off, which I really enjoy and which makes me relaxed.

The adverb 'frequently' was incorrectly placed at the beginning with 'A'. It should be 'I frequently watch movies'. Also, 'a popcorn' is incorrect because 'popcorn' is uncountable; no article is needed. 'An lights' is incorrect; it should be 'the lights'. 'Makes me Richards' seems to be a typo; 'relaxed' fits the context. Proper sentence separation improves clarity.

× I usually watch movies with comedy genre as it ******* my soul and relieves stress is after the long working hours. Therefore I love watching movie with comedy genre.

✓ I usually watch movies of the comedy genre as it refreshes my soul and relieves stress after long working hours. Therefore, I love watching movies of the comedy genre.

The phrase 'movies with comedy genre' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' for genres. '*******' seems to be a placeholder; 'refreshes' fits the meaning. 'Stress is after' is incorrect; it should be 'relieves stress after'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the context.

× I I prefer watching at home rather than at cinema because at home you can you can state whatever position you want and can laugh. Add whatever disable you can. Oh which will not be judged by others. Therefore I prefer watching movies at home.

✓ I prefer watching at home rather than at the cinema because at home you can choose whatever position you want and can laugh and do whatever you like without being judged by others. Therefore, I prefer watching movies at home.

Repeated 'I' and 'you can' are redundant and incorrect. 'State whatever position' is incorrect; 'choose whatever position' is correct. 'Add whatever disable you can' is unclear; likely meant 'do whatever you like'. 'Oh which will not be judged' is incorrect; should be 'without being judged'. Also, 'at cinema' should be 'at the cinema'.

× Yes, I find it very much useful to watch movies in other languages rather than my mother tongue as movies was a great source for me to learn English so I prefer watching. Movies at English rather than in my mother tongue. Therefore movie can be very useful to learn new languages.

✓ Yes, I find it very useful to watch movies in other languages rather than in my mother tongue, as movies were a great source for me to learn English. So, I prefer watching movies in English rather than in my mother tongue. Therefore, movies can be very useful to learn new languages.

'Movies was' is incorrect; 'movies' is plural, so 'were' is correct. 'Movies at English' is incorrect; it should be 'movies in English'. 'Movie can be' should be 'movies can be' to agree in number. Also, sentence fragments were corrected for clarity.