Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Intenta responder con una estructura más clara y natural. Por ejemplo, usa frases completas y evita redundancias como "every time that I have time in every day". Podrías decir "I watch movies whenever I have free time during the day."

예시: I watch movies whenever I have free time during the day, usually in the evenings after work.

제안: Procura usar conectores para que la respuesta sea más coherente y natural. Además, explica con más detalle y claridad por qué te gustan esos géneros. Por ejemplo, podrías decir "I usually watch horror thrillers because they provoke strong emotions and feelings, such as anxiety and excitement."

예시: I usually watch horror thrillers because they provoke strong emotions and feelings, such as anxiety and excitement, which I find thrilling.

제안: La respuesta es confusa y tiene errores gramaticales. Intenta estructurar mejor la oración y usar conectores. Por ejemplo: "I definitely prefer the cinema because the sound quality and the reactions of the audience make the experience priceless."

예시: I definitely prefer the cinema because the sound quality and the reactions of the audience make the experience priceless and more enjoyable.

제안: Mejora la gramática y la coherencia usando conectores y frases completas. Por ejemplo: "Yes, it is really useful because you not only learn new vocabulary but also understand different interpretations of words, which can vary depending on the country."

예시: Yes, it is really useful because you not only learn new vocabulary but also understand different interpretations of words, which can vary depending on the country.

× Every time that I have time in every day.

✓ Every time that I have time every day.

The phrase 'in every day' is incorrect because 'every day' already indicates frequency and does not require the preposition 'in'. The correct expression is 'every day'. This is an issue with the use of present tense adverbial phrases.

× Horror thriller because the main reason is the emotions and feelings that provoke that type of films without forgetting the anxiety.

✓ Horror thrillers because the main reason is the emotions and feelings that these types of films provoke, without forgetting the anxiety.

The noun 'Horror thriller' should be plural 'Horror thrillers' to match the general category. Also, 'that type of films' is incorrect because 'type' is singular and 'films' is plural; it should be 'these types of films' or 'that type of film'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Definitely the cinema, the experience of the sound of the screen taking can also the reaction of the people is priceless.

✓ Definitely the cinema; the experience of the sound from the screen and also the reaction of the people is priceless.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. It lacks proper conjunctions and prepositions, causing sentence structure errors. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by adding necessary prepositions and punctuation.

× Really useful because not only learn new vocabulary, also experiment different interpretations about a word, but depending on the country can significant something different anytime.

✓ It's really useful because you not only learn new vocabulary, but also experience different interpretations of a word; depending on the country, it can mean something different at any time.

The original sentence lacks subjects and auxiliary verbs, causing sentence structure errors. Also, 'experiment' should be 'experience', and 'can significant something different anytime' is incorrect; it should be 'it can mean something different at any time'. The correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.