Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make it more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'on weekends' twice, you can say 'I mostly watch movies on weekends because I am busy during weekdays. I usually go to the cinema with my friends to enjoy different types of movies.'

예시: I mostly watch movies on weekends because I am busy during weekdays. Therefore, I usually go to the cinema with my friends to enjoy different types of movies and relax.

제안: Your answer provides good examples but needs better sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid grammatical errors such as 'which was very funny and inspiring film that really enjoyed.' Try to say 'which was a very funny and inspiring film that I really enjoyed.'

예시: I usually enjoy watching animated movies like Ice Age 3 because they have interesting characters and realistic animation. Additionally, I like funny movies; for example, I recently watched Three Idiots, which was a very funny and inspiring film that I really enjoyed.

제안: Your answer is detailed and well-structured with good use of linking words. To improve, try to make your sentences more concise and avoid minor redundancies like 'especially when I'm not feeling well or just want to relax' which can be combined.

예시: I usually prefer watching movies at the cinema with my friends or family on weekends because the big screen and sound system create an exciting experience. However, when I feel unwell or want to relax, I enjoy watching movies at home, especially during winters when I like staying indoors.

제안: Your answer is relevant and informative but contains minor grammatical errors such as 'watching English movies help me' which should be 'helps me' and 'make learning' which should be 'makes learning.' Use singular/plural agreement carefully and try to vary your vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is very useful, especially for people who want to learn new languages. For instance, watching English movies helps me improve my listening skills and expand my vocabulary. Moreover, it exposes me to different cultures and makes learning more enjoyable.

× For instance, watching English movies help me improve my listening skills and improve my vocabulary.

✓ For instance, watching English movies helps me improve my listening skills and improve my vocabulary.

The subject 'watching English movies' is singular, so the verb should be in third person singular form 'helps' instead of 'help'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to present tense usage.

× Also, it exposes me to different cultures and make learning more enjoyable.

✓ Also, it exposes me to different cultures and makes learning more enjoyable.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in present tense third person singular form.

× I also like funny movies like recently I watched Three Idiots which was very funny and inspiring film that really enjoyed.

✓ I also like funny movies like recently I watched Three Idiots which was a very funny and inspiring film that I really enjoyed.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very funny and inspiring film' and the phrase 'that really enjoyed' lacks the subject 'I'. Also, 'enjoyed' is correctly in past tense but needs the subject for clarity.