Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use the past simple tense correctly and avoid repeating words like 'almost'. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: I used to watch movies almost every day before I came to the UK because I had plenty of free time. However, since moving here, I rarely watch movies due to my heavy university workload.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking. Also, 'Star Wars 3' is not a classical movie from the 1960s or 1970s, so ensure your examples match your statements.

예시: I usually watch classic movies from the 1960s and 1970s because I'm fascinated by American history and that period is known as the golden age of Hollywood. For instance, I enjoy films like 'The Godfather' because of their compelling storylines.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more natural by using smoother linking phrases and avoiding awkward expressions like 'pause function is essential for my life'. Try to explain reasons more naturally.

예시: When I was a child, I preferred going to the cinema because I enjoyed the restaurants there. However, now I usually watch movies on apps like Netflix on my smartphone, which is convenient because I can pause and resume whenever I want.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Avoid repeating 'efficient' and try to provide more specific reasons or examples.

예시: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is very helpful for learning. For example, I began watching films with English subtitles two years ago, which has significantly improved my vocabulary and listening skills.

× Before I came to the UK I almost watch movies almost every day because I had a lot of time to spend on that.

✓ Before I came to the UK I almost watched movies almost every day because I had a lot of time to spend on that.

The sentence refers to a past time frame ('Before I came to the UK'), so the verb 'watch' should be in the past tense 'watched' to maintain tense consistency.

× But after coming to new Home I have never watched the movies because I don't have enough time as there are plenty of homeworks in university.

✓ But after coming to my new home I have never watched movies because I don't have enough time as there is plenty of homework at university.

'New Home' should be 'my new home' to specify possession. 'The movies' is incorrect here; 'movies' without 'the' is appropriate. 'Homeworks' is uncountable and should be 'homework'. Also, 'in university' is better expressed as 'at university'. 'There are plenty of homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is uncountable and singular, so 'there is plenty of homework' is correct.

× I usually watch classical movies made in the 1960s or 1970s because I'm very interested in history in the US and that era is called as the golden age of Hollywood movies.

✓ I usually watch classical movies made in the 1960s or 1970s because I'm very interested in history of the US and that era is called the golden age of Hollywood movies.

The phrase 'interested in history in the US' should be 'interested in history of the US' to correctly express the subject of interest. Also, 'called as' is incorrect; it should be 'called' without 'as'.

× For example, I prefer watching a Star Wars 3 because the storylines are quite thrilling.

✓ For example, I prefer watching Star Wars 3 because the storylines are quite thrilling.

The article 'a' before 'Star Wars 3' is unnecessary because 'Star Wars 3' is a proper noun (a movie title) and does not require an article.

× In my childhood, I preferred going to cinemas because I love the restaurants in the cinema complex.

✓ In my childhood, I preferred going to cinemas because I loved the restaurants in the cinema complex.

The sentence refers to past time ('In my childhood'), so 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to maintain tense consistency.

× For example, pause function is essential for my life.

✓ For example, the pause function is essential for my life.

The noun phrase 'pause function' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific function known to both speaker and listener.

× Yes, I believe that watching movies with different language from one's mother tongue is quite efficient and useful for language learning.

✓ Yes, I believe that watching movies in a different language from one's mother tongue is quite efficient and useful for language learning.

The phrase 'with different language' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to the language used in movies. Also, 'a different language' is needed to indicate one among many possible languages.

× In my case, I started watching movies with English subtitles two years ago and I found it's quite efficient for learning recently.

✓ In my case, I started watching movies with English subtitles two years ago and I have found it's quite efficient for learning recently.

The phrase 'I found' should be present perfect 'I have found' because the effect or experience continues up to the present. Also, 'recently' fits better with present perfect tense.