Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，缺乏连贯性。建议简化表达，直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子说明原因。

예시: I usually watch movies about once a year because I am very busy with work and other activities. Also, I find it hard to find movies that really interest me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用清晰的句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明喜欢的电影类型和原因。

예시: I usually enjoy classic comedy movies because their funny dialogues always make me laugh. In addition, I like animated movies since they are entertaining and suitable for all ages.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，缺少逻辑连贯性。建议直接表达偏好，使用连接词说明原因，并注意语法正确。

예시: I prefer watching movies at home because streaming services like Netflix are very convenient. Moreover, I can watch movies anytime, even when I am traveling, and it is cheaper than going to the cinema.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，明确说明看外语电影的好处，并举具体例子。

예시: Definitely. Watching movies in other languages helps me improve my pronunciation and vocabulary. For example, by watching English or Japanese films, I can learn new words and understand their meanings better.

× Honestly I watched a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer what some of the movies which is shot just like wheels in the Instagram and there's no movie is not suitable for us now.

✓ Honestly, I watch a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer some movies which are shot just like reels on Instagram and there is no movie that is not suitable for us now.

这里的时间状语是“nowadays”（现在），表示现在的习惯动作，应该用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× Honestly I watched a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer what some of the movies which is shot just like wheels in the Instagram and there's no movie is not suitable for us now.

✓ Honestly, I watch a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer some movies which are shot just like reels on Instagram and there is no movie that is not suitable for us now.

movies是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，而不是单数is。

× Honestly I watched a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer what some of the movies which is shot just like wheels in the Instagram and there's no movie is not suitable for us now.

✓ Honestly, I watch a movie once a year because nowadays in the fast-paced city we all prefer some movies which are shot just like reels on Instagram and there is no movie that is not suitable for us now.

这里的关系代词使用不当，应该用that引导定语从句，而不是what。

× I like to watch some of these classic fun movies, especially created by Zhongshi because the ridiculous conversation always can make me laugh.

✓ I like to watch some of these classic fun movies, especially those created by Zhongshi because the ridiculous conversations always can make me laugh.

movies是复数，前面应加those指代，conversation应为复数形式conversations。

× In addition, uh, the cartoon movie also quite fun for me because it can avoid me into the children room.

✓ In addition, uh, cartoon movies are also quite fun for me because they can keep me out of the children's room.

avoid后面不能直接跟宾语，应该用keep sb. out of sth.来表达避免进入某地；children's room需要所有格形式。

× I prefer watching movies at home because I'm nowadays Netflix is popular.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home because Netflix is popular nowadays.

“I'm nowadays Netflix is popular”结构错误，应改为“Netflix is popular nowadays”，保持一般现在时。

× It imply that I need the knowledge to go to outside to go to watch the movie is quite convenient for me because I can watch the movie during travelling or busy.

✓ It implies that I don't need to go outside to watch movies, which is quite convenient for me because I can watch movies while travelling or when busy.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且表达不清，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× Also it's quite cheaper than the.

✓ Also, it's quite cheaper than going to the cinema.

比较级后面应有比较对象，原句缺少比较对象，导致句子不完整。

× Definitely because umm, if you watch some of the movie without any license, it can help me to improve the English or Japanese.

✓ Definitely, because if you watch some movies without any subtitles, it can help me improve my English or Japanese.

movie应为复数movies；license用词不当，应该是subtitles（字幕）；improve后面不需要to。

× Definitely because umm, if you watch some of the movie without any license, it can help me to improve the English or Japanese.

✓ Definitely, because if you watch some movies without any subtitles, it can help me improve my English or Japanese.

it指代不明确，应指代watching movies；improve后面不需要to；English和Japanese前不加the。

× For example, I can learn how to pronounce and what is the meaning of the word.

✓ For example, I can learn how to pronounce words and what the meaning of the words is.

learn后面应接名词或名词短语；句子结构应调整为“what the meaning of the words is”。