Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「the movie」ではなく「movies」と複数形を使い、「where I have free time」よりも「when I have free time」が自然です。また、文を簡潔にし、冗長さを避けることが重要です。

예시: I usually watch movies when I have free time, mostly on my iPad using Netflix.

제안: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法や語順の誤りが多く、冗長な表現もあります。例えば、「like action movie like Marvel that especially like Avengers」よりも「I especially enjoy action movies like Marvel's Avengers」の方が自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より明確にしましょう。

예시: I especially enjoy action movies, such as Marvel's Avengers, because I find their stories very exciting.

제안: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「this is very depends」ではなく「it depends a lot」や「I wanna」ではなく「I want to」を使うと良いです。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢にしましょう。

예시: It depends on the situation; I usually watch at home when I have free time, but I prefer going to the cinema with my friends because I enjoy the atmosphere there.

제안: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「watch movie」ではなく「watch movies」、「to I can learn」ではなく「so I can learn」が自然です。また、「podcasts」ではなく「phrases」や「expressions」が適切です。より具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful. For example, when I was learning English, I often watched movies with English subtitles so I could learn new phrases and improve my listening skills.

× Actually I usually watch the movie where I have free time but I watch them from my iPad like Netflix.

✓ Actually I usually watch movies when I have free time, and I watch them on my iPad using apps like Netflix.

'The movie' should be plural 'movies' because the student refers to watching movies in general, not a single movie. Also, 'where I have free time' is incorrect; 'when I have free time' is appropriate to indicate time. 'From my iPad like Netflix' is awkward; 'on my iPad using apps like Netflix' is clearer.

× I really like to watch like action movie like Marvel that especially like Avengers that's really enjoy to watch.

✓ I really like to watch action movies like Marvel, especially Avengers, which are really enjoyable to watch.

'Action movie' should be plural 'action movies' because the student refers to a category of movies. 'That's really enjoy to watch' is incorrect; it should be 'which are really enjoyable to watch' to agree in number and use the correct adjective form.

× I think this is very depends on the situation because when I have free time I watch at home but when I wanna watch with my friends I usually go cinema.

✓ I think it very much depends on the situation because when I have free time, I watch at home, but when I want to watch with my friends, I usually go to the cinema.

'This is very depends' is incorrect; it should be 'it very much depends'. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is better. 'Go cinema' lacks the preposition 'to'; it should be 'go to the cinema'.

× But I really like to go into cinema because I like the environment.

✓ But I really like to go to the cinema because I like the environment.

'Go into cinema' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go to the cinema' when referring to attending a movie theater.

× Yeah, this is actually very useful to watch movie in other languages because this is my experience where I was learning English.

✓ Yeah, it is actually very useful to watch movies in other languages because this was my experience when I was learning English.

'Watch movie' should be 'watch movies' to indicate the general activity. 'This is my experience where' is awkward; 'this was my experience when' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× I often watch the movie with English subtitle to I can learn many podcasts from the movie.

✓ I often watch movies with English subtitles so I can learn a lot from them.

'The movie' should be plural 'movies' to indicate general activity. 'English subtitle' should be plural 'English subtitles'. 'To I can learn' is incorrect; 'so I can learn' is appropriate. 'Many podcasts from the movie' is unclear; likely the student means 'a lot from them' or 'many phrases'.