Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear frequency of watching movies.

예시: I usually watch movies on weekends, about two episodes of a series per week. However, recently I have been quite busy, so I haven't had much time to watch movies.

제안: Improve clarity by correcting vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference and feelings more naturally and specifically.

예시: I usually watch romance movies, especially American ones. I enjoy them because they make me feel the emotions of love, and I get curious about what will happen next in the story.

제안: Avoid filler words and repetition. Structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words to compare the two options.

예시: It depends on the mood I want. If I want an exciting experience and to feel the movie's atmosphere, I prefer going to the cinema. Otherwise, I don't mind watching movies at home because it's more comfortable.

제안: Make your answer more fluent by removing fillers and correcting grammar. Use linking words to explain the benefits clearly and provide specific examples.

예시: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful. For example, I have been watching English movies for a few years, which has greatly improved my listening skills. Now, I can understand them without subtitles.

× I really like to watch movies at the weekends and I would say I watch movie like movie series like 2 episodes per week but currently I'm not that free at the time so I don't have time to watch movie.

✓ I really like to watch movies at the weekends and I would say I watch movies like movie series, about 2 episodes per week, but currently I'm not that free at the time so I don't have time to watch movies.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' when referring to multiple films or episodes. Using singular 'movie' in this context is incorrect because the speaker talks about watching multiple episodes or series, which requires the plural form.

× I usually watch Ramas movies, especially American romance because while I'm watching romance movie I feel the love inside me and then it just makes me so curious what will happen next.

✓ I usually watch romance movies, especially American romance, because while I'm watching romance movies I feel the love inside me and then it just makes me so curious about what will happen next.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' when referring to more than one film. Also, 'Ramas' seems to be a typo for 'romance'. The plural form is necessary because the speaker refers to multiple movies.

× I usually watch Ramas movies, especially American romance because while I'm watching romance movie I feel the love inside me and then it just makes me so curious what will happen next.

✓ I usually watch romance movies, especially American romance, because while I'm watching romance movies I feel the love inside me and then it just makes me so curious about what will happen next.

The phrase 'curious what will happen next' is missing the preposition 'about' which is required after 'curious' to indicate the object of curiosity.

× I think it depends on what kind of vibe that I want.

✓ I think it depends on what kind of vibe I want.

The relative pronoun 'that' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. The phrase 'what kind of vibe I want' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× If I want like umm really exciting like I just if I just wanna feel the movies vibe I I will go to cinema and if I don't, I don't mind watching at home because it's the same thing.

✓ If I want a really exciting vibe, like if I just want to feel the movie's vibe, I will go to the cinema, and if I don't, I don't mind watching at home because it's the same thing.

The sentence needed clearer pronoun and article usage. 'Movies vibe' should be 'movie's vibe' to show possession. Also, 'go to cinema' requires the definite article 'the' as 'cinema' is a specific place here.

× If I want like umm really exciting like I just if I just wanna feel the movies vibe I I will go to cinema and if I don't, I don't mind watching at home because it's the same thing.

✓ If I want a really exciting vibe, like if I just want to feel the movie's vibe, I will go to the cinema, and if I don't, I don't mind watching at home because it's the same thing.

The phrase 'go to cinema' requires the definite article 'the' before 'cinema' because it refers to a specific place. Also, 'movies vibe' should be 'movie's vibe' to indicate possession.

× And now I don't need to put subtitle on I I just can't hear and understand what they are saying.

✓ And now I don't need to put subtitles on; I can just hear and understand what they are saying.

The modal verb 'can't' is incorrect here because the speaker means they are now able to hear and understand without subtitles. The correct modal verb is 'can'. Also, 'subtitle' should be plural 'subtitles' as it refers to the text displayed during the movie.