Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't watch movies very often. However, I usually go to the cinema with my friends about five times a year when we hang out together.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như số nhiều, đồng thời nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích lý do hoặc đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I usually watch many types of movies, but I prefer romantic comedies because they are light-hearted and fun to watch.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và chính tả (ví dụ: 'shower' nên là 'sound'), đồng thời câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và mở rộng câu trả lời với lý do cụ thể.

예시: I prefer watching movies at the cinema because the sound and screen quality are much better than at home. Besides, my parents don't allow me to invite friends over, so the cinema is a better place to watch movies with them.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful for language learners. It helps us enjoy the films and learn new vocabulary and expressions that we might not learn in school.

× Honestly, I don't like watching movie, but I also watch movie at the cinema with my friend when we go outside, although that then I get frequency is five times of the year.

✓ Honestly, I don't like watching movies, but I also watch movies at the cinema with my friends when we go out, although the frequency is about five times a year.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to more than one film. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' if more than one friend is implied. 'Go outside' is better expressed as 'go out' in this context. 'Frequency is five times of the year' is awkward; it should be 'the frequency is about five times a year' to express how often the action occurs.

× I saw a lot of type of movie however I prefer the ROM com movie.

✓ I have seen a lot of types of movies; however, I prefer romantic comedy movies.

'Type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple categories. 'Movie' should be plural 'movies' to match 'types'. 'ROM com' should be 'romantic comedy' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer watching movie at the cinema because I believe that the shower and the screen at the cinema is better than my house.

✓ I prefer watching movies at the cinema because I believe that the sound and the screen at the cinema are better than at my house.

'Movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to the activity in general. 'Shower' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'sound'. 'Screen' and 'sound' are plural subjects here and should be followed by 'are' instead of 'is'. 'Than my house' should be 'than at my house' for clarity.

× Beside that my parents, they don't allow me to invite my friend to my house, so I choose the cinema to watch with my friend.

✓ Besides that, my parents don't allow me to invite my friends to my house, so I choose the cinema to watch movies with my friends.

'Beside' should be 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' if more than one friend is implied. 'They' is redundant after 'my parents'. 'Watch with my friend' should be 'watch movies with my friends' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, it is very necessary for a person who is learning other language because we cannot enjoy the films and not also learn a lot about new vocabularies.

✓ Yes, it is very necessary for a person who is learning another language because we can not only enjoy the films but also learn a lot of new vocabulary.

'Other language' should be 'another language' to refer to a different language. 'Cannot enjoy the films and not also learn' is incorrect; it should be 'can not only enjoy the films but also learn'. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect; 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Especially we cannot learn a the communicating world, which we cannot learn at school.

✓ Especially, we cannot learn about the communicating world, which we cannot learn at school.

The phrase 'a the communicating world' is incorrect; it should be 'about the communicating world'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs 'about' to clarify the meaning.