Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by stating the frequency clearly and then giving a reason with linking words.

예시: I usually watch movies once a month because I find it very relaxing to enjoy the atmosphere in a movie theater.

제안: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases like 'UMM'. Also, provide a clear opinion and explanation with linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually watch love story movies because I enjoy emotional and romantic plots, although my boyfriend thinks they are a waste of time.

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and combine your ideas into one coherent sentence using linking words for better flow.

예시: I prefer watching movies in the cinema because it is more relaxing, and I can enjoy eating popcorn without distractions.

제안: If you don't understand a question, try to ask for clarification politely or attempt to answer based on your knowledge. Avoid repeating that you don't understand multiple times.

예시: I'm sorry, could you please explain what you mean by 'useful'? However, I think watching movies in other languages can help improve language skills and cultural understanding.

× I usually watch movies like uh once a month because I really into watching movies movies.

✓ I usually watch movies like uh once a month because I am really into watching movies.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' before 'really into watching movies'. The phrase 'be into' requires a form of the verb 'to be' followed by the -ing form of the verb. Adding 'am' corrects the sentence structure.

× It is very relaxed if you go to movie theater to enjoy the moment.

✓ It is very relaxing if you go to the movie theater to enjoy the moment.

The adjective 'relaxed' describes a person feeling relaxed, but here the intended meaning is that the experience is enjoyable or calming, so 'relaxing' is appropriate. Also, 'movie theater' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I usually watch a love story movies and UMM.

✓ I usually watch love story movies and UMM.

The phrase 'a love story movies' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'movies'. Removing 'a' makes the phrase grammatically correct as it refers to plural movies.

× It's interesting because my boyfriend always told me it's a UMM They are the worst movies because they because my boyfriend think thought it just a waste time.

✓ It's interesting because my boyfriend always tells me it's a UMM. They are the worst movies because my boyfriend thinks it is just a waste of time.

The verb tense should be present simple 'tells' to match 'always' indicating habitual action. 'Think' should be 'thinks' to agree with singular subject 'boyfriend'. Also, 'a waste time' should be 'a waste of time' for correct expression.

× I prefer to watch movies in cinema because I think it is much, umm, relaxed.

✓ I prefer to watch movies at the cinema because I think it is much, umm, more relaxing.

The correct preposition for places like cinema is 'at'. Also, 'relaxed' should be 'more relaxing' to describe the experience, and 'much' is better paired with 'more relaxing'.

× And I can just eat the popcorn whatever I want.

✓ And I can just eat popcorn whenever I want.

'Popcorn' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the' unless referring to specific popcorn. Also, 'whatever' should be 'whenever' to indicate any time.