Movies— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. For example, clearly state how often you watch movies, where you watch them, and mention a favorite movie with a brief reason why you like it.

예시: I usually watch movies about twice a week, mostly at home through streaming services. I don't often go to the cinema because it's less convenient for me. My favorite movie is the Korean drama 'Itaewon Class' because it has an interesting story and great characters.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and is incomplete. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example, mention the genre you like, name a specific movie, and explain why you enjoy it.

예시: I usually watch musical movies, especially 'The Greatest Showman'. The main actor, Hugh Jackman, delivers an amazing performance. I really enjoy the music and the story, which makes the movie very entertaining.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Provide a clear preference statement first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. For example, explain why watching at home is convenient and mention the variety of movies you can access.

예시: I prefer watching movies at home because it is more convenient and comfortable. Also, I have access to a wide range of international films, which I find very interesting. This way, I can enjoy movies from different cultures easily.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Start with a clear opinion, then explain why watching movies in other languages is useful, using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. For example, mention language learning benefits and cultural understanding.

예시: I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve language skills and exposes me to different cultures. For example, when movies have subtitles, I can understand the story better and learn new vocabulary.

× I often watch movies I think twice a week.

✓ I often watch movies, I think twice a week.

The original sentence lacks a comma to separate two independent clauses, which affects clarity. Adding a comma improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I would, I watched movies twice a week.

✓ I would say I watch movies twice a week.

The phrase 'I would' is incomplete and incorrectly followed by 'I watched'. The correct expression is 'I would say' to indicate an estimate or opinion, and 'watch' should be in present tense to match the habitual action.

× I don't watch in the movie theater, but I try.

✓ I don't watch movies in the movie theater, but I try.

The verb 'watch' requires a direct object, so 'movies' should be included. Also, the prepositional phrase 'in the movie theater' should follow the object for correct word order.

× I subscribe the networks.

✓ I subscribe to the networks.

The verb 'subscribe' is followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating what one subscribes to. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× My, my favorite movie is Korean movie like Iteong class, which is really fun for me and I all I'm.

✓ My favorite movie is a Korean movie like Itaewon Class, which is really fun for me.

The sentence has repetition ('My, my'), missing article before 'Korean movie', misspelling of 'Itaewon Class', and an incomplete phrase 'and I all I'm'. These errors affect clarity and correctness.

× I often watch some musical movies like especially like greatest Showman, which is 1 one of the most famous musical music.

✓ I often watch musical movies, especially The Greatest Showman, which is one of the most famous musicals.

The phrase 'some musical movies like especially like' is redundant and awkward. 'The Greatest Showman' is a proper noun and should be capitalized and preceded by 'The'. Also, 'musical music' is incorrect; 'musicals' is the correct term.

× The the main character is Hugh Jackman, who is the famous most famous actor in Harriet and I I was so into it and I remember the the.

✓ The main character is Hugh Jackman, who is a famous actor, and I was really into it.

Repetition of 'the the' and 'I I' are errors. 'Famous most famous' is redundant; 'a famous actor' suffices. The phrase 'in Harriet' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence ends abruptly and should be completed or simplified.

× I prefer to watching at home because it's more convenient than going to the theater.

✓ I prefer watching at home because it's more convenient than going to the theater.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'to'. 'Prefer to watching' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer watching' or 'prefer to watch'.

× And also I can compare to other movies, uh, for so many movies from other countries, international, global, uh, movies.

✓ And also I can compare it to other movies, including many from other countries, international and global movies.

The verb 'compare' requires an object and the preposition 'to'. The original sentence lacks clarity and correct structure.

× So it's really interesting for me, but I can understand the good, the, how good it is, how good theory it is so I can.

✓ So it's really interesting for me, and I can understand how good it is, so I can appreciate it.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear pronoun references ('the good, the, how good theory it is'). The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× I think it's real really useful to watch movies in other language because if, uh, if the original movie with is the different from different countries, I can understand.

✓ I think it's really useful to watch movies in other languages because if the original movie is different in different countries, I can understand.

The phrase 'real really' is redundant; 'really' suffices. 'Other language' should be plural 'other languages'. The clause 'if the original movie with is the different from different countries' is ungrammatical and corrected for clarity.

× But if there isn't a subtitles or diff, uh, subtitles with Japanese, I can easily understand that movie.

✓ But if there aren't subtitles or different subtitles in Japanese, I can easily understand that movie.

'Subtitles' is plural, so 'isn't' should be 'aren't'. Also, 'diff' is informal and should be 'different'. The preposition 'with' should be 'in' when referring to language.

× So, and I can share with my opinions to the the.

✓ So, I can share my opinions with others.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repetition ('to the the'). The correction completes the sentence and corrects preposition use.