E-books— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, correct small errors like 'wearing a reading' which seems incorrect. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: If I have free time, I prefer reading paper books in the library because I enjoy the smell and feel of the pages. Moreover, holding a physical book makes the experience more enjoyable.

제안: Reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, try to combine sentences using linking words to make your answer more fluent and natural.

예시: I usually read online when I'm traveling because I carry my iPad, which makes it convenient to read on the go.

제안: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Finish your thoughts clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

예시: I will probably read more online in the future because e-books offer a wide variety of options, and sometimes it is hard to find physical copies of certain books.

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'however' appropriately to connect ideas.

예시: Due to my busy schedule, I rarely read whole books except during vacations. However, I often read magazines and articles about fashion or cooking online.

제안: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare and contrast clearly. Also, correct grammar errors like 'ebook are' to 'e-books are'.

예시: Reading paper books offers a tactile experience, such as feeling the pages and smelling the book. In contrast, e-books are more convenient because they provide a wide variety of options to choose from online.

× I would definitely want to be in library wearing a reading a paper book because I really like the smell of a book.

✓ I would definitely want to be in the library reading a paper book because I really like the smell of a book.

The phrase 'wearing a reading a paper book' is incorrect. The correct form is 'reading a paper book' without 'wearing'. Also, 'in library' should be 'in the library' because 'library' is a singular countable noun requiring the definite article 'the'.

× I would definitely want to be in library wearing a reading a paper book because I really like the smell of a book.

✓ I would definitely want to be in the library reading a paper book because I really like the smell of a book.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. So, 'in library' should be corrected to 'in the library'.

× you can touch the cover the the.

✓ you can touch the cover.

The phrase 'the cover the the' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'the cover'. The definite article 'the' is used once before 'cover'.

× Whereas ebook are more convenient.

✓ Whereas ebooks are more convenient.

The noun 'ebook' is singular, but the verb 'are' is plural. To agree with the plural verb 'are', the noun should be pluralized to 'ebooks'.

× Whereas ebook are more convenient.

✓ Whereas ebooks are more convenient.

The noun 'ebook' is countable and plural here, so it should be 'ebooks' without the definite article 'the' unless referring to specific ebooks. The sentence is correct without 'the'.

× I think ebook has lots of options like you can read any sort of book and you can find almost every kind of book online, whereas finding a physical copy or paper book is kind of difficult sometimes.

✓ I think ebooks have lots of options like you can read any sort of book and you can find almost every kind of book online, whereas finding a physical copy or paper book is kind of difficult sometimes.

The noun 'ebook' should be plural 'ebooks' to match the plural verb 'have'. Also, 'paper book' should be 'paper books' to be consistent in plural form when talking generally.