E-books— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. For example, use 'they provide' instead of 'it provides' when referring to paper books, and avoid informal contractions like 'cause'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually prefer paper books because they provide a tactile experience and a more realistic feeling when flipping pages. However, when I travel, I carry my tablet with e-books since it is more convenient and portable.

제안: Your answer repeats 'usually' and could be more concise. Also, the phrase 'carry my tablet along with myself' is awkward; simply say 'carry my tablet with me'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually read e-books when I am traveling away from home because I carry my tablet with me. It offers useful features like adjusting font size and brightness, which makes reading more comfortable.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to use simpler sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'literally change the whole era'. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Technology has evolved a lot recently, for example, libraries now use holograms. Therefore, I believe that online reading will definitely be a part of my life in the future.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and correcting minor grammar mistakes. For example, say 'about the introduction' instead of 'based on the introduction'. Also, provide a brief opinion or reason to enrich your answer.

예시: I enjoy reading news articles and blogs on apps like The Hindu and The Tribune. Recently, I read an article about the introduction of a 1000 rupee coin by PM Modi to commemorate Rajinder Chola's birth, which I found very interesting because it highlights important cultural events.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding vague phrases like 'different perspective' and by using linking words. Also, try to expand your answer slightly with specific examples.

예시: Reading online is different from paper because it is more convenient and offers features like adjusting font size, brightness, and contrast. These options make reading easier, especially in different lighting conditions.

× Well, I usually prefer paper books because it provides tactile experience and more realistic view of reading by flipping pages back and forth.

✓ Well, I usually prefer paper books because they provide tactile experience and a more realistic view of reading by flipping pages back and forth.

The subject 'paper books' is plural, so the verb should be 'provide' instead of 'provides'. Also, 'tactile experience' and 'more realistic view' need articles to be grammatically correct: 'a tactile experience' and 'a more realistic view'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper article usage.

× But when I'm travelling I usually carry my tablet which contains ebook 'cause it is quite inconvenient and portable.

✓ But when I'm travelling I usually carry my tablet which contains ebooks because it is quite convenient and portable.

The phrase 'contains ebook' is incorrect because 'ebook' should be plural 'ebooks' to match the context. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because'. The word 'inconvenient' contradicts the intended meaning; it should be 'convenient' to express ease of carrying the tablet.

× I usually carry my tablet along with myself because it provides various options such as adjusting font size and brightness to reach it conveniently.

✓ I usually carry my tablet with me because it provides various options such as adjusting font size and brightness to access it conveniently.

The phrase 'along with myself' is incorrect; the correct pronoun usage is 'with me'. Also, 'to reach it conveniently' is awkward; 'to access it conveniently' is more appropriate when referring to using features on a tablet.

× Well, in the contemporary time technology has been evolved drastically such as introduction of holograms in library literally change the whole era of library.

✓ Well, in contemporary times technology has evolved drastically; the introduction of holograms in libraries has literally changed the whole era of libraries.

The phrase 'has been evolved' is incorrect; 'has evolved' is the correct present perfect tense. 'Contemporary time' should be plural 'contemporary times'. 'Introduction of holograms in library' needs articles and plural forms: 'the introduction of holograms in libraries'. 'Change' should be 'changed' to agree with the present perfect tense.

× So I think reading from online will definitely be involved in my future life.

✓ So I think reading online will definitely be involved in my future life.

The phrase 'reading from online' is incorrect; the preposition 'from' is unnecessary. The correct phrase is 'reading online'.

× Recently I read an article which was based on the introduction of Rupees 1000 coin by the PM Modi to commemorate Rajinder Chola's birth.

✓ Recently I read an article which was about the introduction of the Rupees 1000 coin by PM Modi to commemorate Rajinder Chola's birth.

The phrase 'was based on' is awkward here; 'was about' is more appropriate. Also, 'the Rupees 1000 coin' requires the definite article 'the'. 'The PM Modi' is better as 'PM Modi' without 'the'.

× Well, reading online provides you a different perspective as it is more convenient and easy with various options such as adjusting font size, brightness, contrast and many other features.

✓ Well, reading online provides a different perspective as it is more convenient and easy with various options such as adjusting font size, brightness, contrast, and many other features.

The pronoun 'you' is unnecessary and informal in this context; removing it makes the sentence more formal and appropriate. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.