E-books— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「It takes very convenient」は不自然で、「It is very convenient」が正しいです。また、「interested in the use of future such as searching function」の意味が不明瞭で、具体的に何が便利なのかを明確に説明する必要があります。より自然で効果的な表現を心がけ、文法と語彙の正確さを向上させましょう。

예시: I prefer reading e-books because they are very convenient. For example, I can easily search for specific information using the search function, which saves me time.

제안: 回答に文法ミスと意味の不明瞭な部分があります。「earrings can and disrupt my quality of sleeping」は意味が通じません。おそらく「screen light」や「electronic devices」が睡眠の質を妨げることを言いたかったのだと思います。より明確で正確な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

예시: I usually read e-books in the morning. However, I prefer paper books at midnight because the light from electronic devices can disrupt my sleep.

제안: 回答は質問に適切に答えていますが、文法の誤りがあります。「will decreased」ではなく「will decrease」が正しいです。また、「many young people tend to use online tools, smartphones and electronics such as tablets」という部分は少し冗長なので、簡潔にまとめるとより効果的です。

예시: Yes, I believe paper books will decrease in the near future because many young people prefer using smartphones and tablets.

제안: 回答は内容が具体的ですが、文法と表現に改善の余地があります。「through online」より「online」が自然です。また、「the amount of information is less than now」は不自然で、「there is less information in paper books」などの表現が適切です。より自然な英語表現を心がけましょう。

예시: I usually read international news online because it provides a lot of up-to-date information about foreign affairs. It's hard to find such current news in paper books.

제안: 回答は質問に対してやや不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りがあります。「through online」ではなく「online」が正しいです。また、「over all information in first glance」は不自然で、「overall information at first glance」などが適切です。内容ももう少し具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: When reading online, it can be difficult for some people to understand all the information at first glance. However, I find it easy to browse and find what I need quickly.

× I prefer reading ebooks.

✓ I prefer to read ebooks.

The verb 'prefer' is often followed by the infinitive form 'to read' rather than the gerund 'reading' in formal contexts. Using 'to read' is more appropriate here.

× It takes very convenient because I am interested in the use of future such as searching function.

✓ It is very convenient because I am interested in features such as the search function.

The phrase 'takes very convenient' is incorrect; 'is very convenient' is the correct expression. Also, 'use of future' is unclear and likely a mistranslation; 'features such as the search function' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually use ebooks in the morning.

✓ I usually read ebooks in the morning.

The verb 'use' is less appropriate here; 'read' is the correct verb to describe engaging with ebooks. Also, 'in the morning' is correct preposition usage.

× However I read paper books in the midnight before I go to bed because earrings can and disrupt my quality of sleeping.

✓ However, I read paper books at midnight before I go to bed because earphones can disrupt my quality of sleep.

'In the midnight' should be 'at midnight' (preposition correction). 'Earrings' is incorrect; likely meant 'earphones'. 'Quality of sleeping' should be 'quality of sleep'. These corrections fix plural and prepositional errors.

× Yes, I believe that the amount of paper books will decreased in the near future because many young people tend to use online tools, smartphones and electronics such as tablets.

✓ Yes, I believe that the amount of paper books will decrease in the near future because many young people tend to use online tools, smartphones, and electronics such as tablets.

After 'will', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'decreased' is incorrect; it should be 'decrease'. This is a future tense verb form error.

× I always read international news through online because I can gain a lot of knowledge and information about foreign affairs.

✓ I always read international news online because I can gain a lot of knowledge and information about foreign affairs.

The preposition 'through' is unnecessary here; 'read online' is the correct phrase.

× It is hard for me to get them by using paper books because the amount of information is less than now.

✓ It is hard for me to get them by using paper books because the amount of information is less than before.

The phrase 'less than now' is awkward; 'less than before' is more natural. Also, 'amount of information' is correct as information is uncountable.

× I'm reading something through online.

✓ I read something online.

The present continuous 'I'm reading' is less appropriate here; simple present 'I read' fits better for habitual action. Also, 'through online' is incorrect; 'online' alone suffices.

× It's hard for many people to grasp the over all information in first glance, but I can browse easily.

✓ It's hard for many people to grasp the overall information at first glance, but I can browse easily.

'Over all' should be 'overall' (one word). The preposition 'in' should be 'at' in the phrase 'at first glance'.