E-books— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体理由支持观点。

예시: I prefer e-books because they help reduce paper usage, which is better for the environment. Also, e-books are more convenient since I can carry many books on one device.

제안: 回答中语法和句子结构不够清晰，建议先明确回答问题，然后用连词连接原因，表达更流畅。

예시: I usually read online at night during my free time because after finishing my homework, I have some time to enjoy my favorite books.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议用简单明了的句子表达未来计划，并具体说明原因。

예시: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it helps me learn more about topics like economics, physics, and emotions.

제안: 回答中混淆了阅读和观看，建议准确使用动词，明确表达喜欢的内容，并用连词连接理由。

예시: Actually, I like watching videos on Tip Top and YouTube because they are interesting and help me relax.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议用简单句子比较两者的不同，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

예시: Reading online is easier because I can access books anytime. But reading paper books requires me to go to the library or bookstore, which takes more time.

× I prefer to watching ebooks because use the ebook can reduce the paper so that it can make our world more healthy.

✓ I prefer watching ebooks because using ebooks can reduce paper, so it can make our world healthier.

动词prefer后面应直接接动名词形式watching，而不是to watching。动词use应改为动名词using以作主语。

× I prefer to watching ebooks because use the ebook can reduce the paper so that it can make our world more healthy.

✓ I prefer watching ebooks because using ebooks can reduce paper, so it can make our world healthier.

形容词healthy应使用比较级healthier来表达“更健康”。

× Also the ebook can changing the works make me more size.

✓ Also, ebooks can change the world and make me grow more.

动词can后应接动词原形change，而不是changing。句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I usually read the book in my free time actually is in the night because if I complete my homework I can have a small time to reading my favorite book in the online.

✓ I usually read books in my free time, actually at night, because if I complete my homework, I can have a little time to read my favorite books online.

介词in the night应改为at night。短语to reading应改为to read。online前不加冠词the。

× I usually read the book in my free time actually is in the night because if I complete my homework I can have a small time to reading my favorite book in the online.

✓ I usually read books in my free time, actually at night, because if I complete my homework, I can have a little time to read my favorite books online.

动词不定式to后应接动词原形read，而不是reading。

× Yes, I will be more online in the future because I won't get more knowledge in the book, for example, about the economic, physically or emotionally that I can have more knowledge.

✓ Yes, I will spend more time online in the future because I can get more knowledge from books, for example, about economics, physics, or emotions, so that I can learn more.

情态动词won't用法不当，应使用can表示能力。

× Yes, I will be more online in the future because I won't get more knowledge in the book, for example, about the economic, physically or emotionally that I can have more knowledge.

✓ Yes, I will spend more time online in the future because I can get more knowledge from books, for example, about economics, physics, or emotions, so that I can learn more.

economic应为名词economics，physically应为名词physics，emotionally应为名词emotions。

× Actually I like to watching the Tip Top and YouTube in the online because it is very interesting and makes me very relaxed when I was watching those videos.

✓ Actually, I like watching Tip Top and YouTube online because they are very interesting and make me very relaxed when I watch those videos.

动词like后应接动名词watching，而不是to watching。过去时was watching应改为一般现在时watch。

× Actually I like to watching the Tip Top and YouTube in the online because it is very interesting and makes me very relaxed when I was watching those videos.

✓ Actually, I like watching Tip Top and YouTube online because they are very interesting and make me very relaxed when I watch those videos.

介词in the online用法错误，应直接用online。

× Maybe the difference is reading online is very easily, but if I read in the paper I need to go to library or shop to buying the reading paper it is very use time.

✓ Maybe the difference is that reading online is very easy, but if I read on paper, I need to go to the library or shop to buy reading materials, which takes a lot of time.

副词easily应改为形容词easy。buying应改为动词原形buy。缺少冠词the。

× Maybe the difference is reading online is very easily, but if I read in the paper I need to go to library or shop to buying the reading paper it is very use time.

✓ Maybe the difference is that reading online is very easy, but if I read on paper, I need to go to the library or shop to buy reading materials, which takes a lot of time.

介词in the paper应改为on paper。

× Maybe the difference is reading online is very easily, but if I read in the paper I need to go to library or shop to buying the reading paper it is very use time.

✓ Maybe the difference is that reading online is very easy, but if I read on paper, I need to go to the library or shop to buy reading materials, which takes a lot of time.

名词library和shop前应加定冠词the。