E-books— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda perlu memperbaiki tata bahasa dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'also'. Selain itu, gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas agar lebih natural dan efektif.

예시: I prefer e-books because they are very accessible and efficient. For example, I can read them anywhere, such as on the train, bus, or even on a plane when traveling abroad.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata kerja, seperti 'I'm get bored' menjadi 'I get bored' dan 'I usually looking' menjadi 'I usually look'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas.

예시: I usually read online when I commute to my office or when I get bored during the weekend. I often look for articles or references on the Internet, especially when I'm teaching my kids.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat, seperti 'I've already found an easiness' menjadi 'I find it easy'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran.

예시: Absolutely, I find it easy to read online. However, sometimes I am too busy because my job occupies most of my time, so I don't have much time to read.

제안: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan struktur kalimat, misalnya 'on that are available' menjadi 'that are available'. Gunakan variasi kosakata dan kalimat yang lebih alami.

예시: I enjoy reading news, novels, and also memes or jokes available on the Internet. Sometimes, I also read horror stories online.

제안: Jawaban kurang jelas dan terdapat banyak pengulangan serta kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas dengan menggunakan kata penghubung yang tepat.

예시: Reading online is quite different from reading paper books because with paper, we can physically touch the pages. However, I find reading online more convenient and easier in many situations.

× I prefer ebooks because it's very accessible and also quite efficient and it can be read everywhere, such as on the train, on the bus and also when I'm travelling overseas I can easily read at the plane.

✓ I prefer ebooks because they're very accessible and also quite efficient, and they can be read everywhere, such as on the train, on the bus, and also when I'm travelling overseas I can easily read on the plane.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' (it is) to refer to 'ebooks' which is plural, so it should be 'they're' (they are). Also, 'at the plane' is incorrect preposition usage; the correct preposition is 'on the plane'. Additionally, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× I usually read online when I commute to my office and also when I'm get bored during the weekend.

✓ I usually read online when I commute to my office and also when I get bored during the weekend.

The phrase 'I'm get bored' is incorrect because 'get' should not be combined with 'am' in this context. The correct form is 'I get bored' to express a habitual action in the present tense.

× I usually looking for some articles or reference in the on the Internet and also when I'm teaching my kids.

✓ I usually look for some articles or references on the Internet and also when I'm teaching my kids.

The phrase 'I usually looking' is incorrect; the verb should be in the base form 'look' after 'usually'. Also, 'reference' should be plural 'references' to match the context, and 'in the on the Internet' is redundant; 'on the Internet' is correct.

× Absolutely, because I've already found an easiness by reading online.

✓ Absolutely, because I've already found it easy to read online.

The word 'easiness' is a noun but awkward in this context. Using 'found it easy' is a more natural and correct expression. Also, 'found an easiness' is not idiomatic English.

× However sometimes I just too busy because I'm fully occupied by my employer so I don't have a lot of time to read.

✓ However, sometimes I am just too busy because I'm fully occupied by my employer, so I don't have a lot of time to read.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I'. 'I just too busy' is incorrect; it should be 'I am just too busy'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× I love to read some news and novels and also some memes or jokes on that are available on the Internet.

✓ I love to read some news and novels and also some memes or jokes that are available on the Internet.

The phrase 'on that are available' is incorrect. The correct relative pronoun is 'that' without 'on'. 'On' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× And sometimes I also read a Horror Story on the Internet.

✓ And sometimes I also read horror stories on the Internet.

'Horror Story' should not be capitalized unless it is a title. Also, 'a Horror Story' suggests a single story, but generally, people read multiple stories, so plural 'horror stories' is more natural.

× At the 31st is actually quite a different because when we can, when we read offline, we can easily touch the sources of the text.

✓ Actually, it is quite different because when we read offline, we can easily touch the sources of the text.

The phrase 'At the 31st' is unclear and likely incorrect. The sentence structure is awkward; starting with 'Actually, it is quite different' is clearer. Also, 'when we can, when we read offline' is redundant; 'when we read offline' suffices.

× Uh, in this case, a book or maybe a newspaper. Uh, besides, it's not a big deal and I found an easiness to read online.

✓ In this case, a book or maybe a newspaper. Besides, it's not a big deal, and I find it easy to read online.

The phrase 'I found an easiness' is awkward; 'I find it easy' is better. Also, 'besides' is used correctly but needs a comma after it. The sentence is split into fragments; combining them improves clarity.