Science— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子并注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

예시: No, I don't enjoy studying science at school because I find it difficult to understand. The teachers speak quickly, so I often struggle to keep up and get low scores.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'sense knowledge'应为'science knowledge'，句子结构不完整，建议使用更准确的词汇并简化表达。

예시: No, I don't use my science knowledge daily because I am a dental student. The science I learn is very specialized and not related to everyday life, although sometimes I need it.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子连接稍显生硬，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

예시: I am not very familiar with science subjects because I didn't study much at school. However, I am interested in astronomy because space and the universe are amazing. Maybe in the future, I will learn more about science in detail.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且部分表达重复，建议适当拆分句子并使用连接词提高表达的连贯性。

예시: Yes, I think it is very important for everyone to study science. It helps us understand how our bodies work and the environment around us. With basic science knowledge, people can make better decisions about technology and health.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如'venture contacts'不合适，建议使用正确词汇并简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I really like watching science programs because they are fascinating and educational. For example, they explain difficult science concepts in an easy way, which makes me want to learn more.

× No, I don't really enjoy science at schools because I find it is strange and it is hard for me to understand fully.

✓ No, I don't really enjoy science at school because I find it is strange and it is hard for me to understand fully.

“school”在这里指的是学校这一整体概念，通常用单数形式，复数形式“schools”不合适。

× I find it is hard to catch up what the teachers saying about science during the classes so I often get back scores at school.

✓ I find it is hard to catch up with what the teachers are saying about science during the classes, so I often get bad scores at school.

“catch up”后面需要介词“with”，且“the teachers saying”应改为现在进行时“the teachers are saying”，表示正在发生的动作。

× No, I don't use my sense knowledge because I am a dental student so it is hard for me to get connected with the science knowledge and the knowledge are quite specialized and doesn't apply to everyday situations but sometimes I need.

✓ No, I don't use my science knowledge because I am a dental student, so it is hard for me to get connected with the science knowledge, and the knowledge is quite specialized and doesn't apply to everyday situations, but sometimes I need to.

“knowledge”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是“are”。

× No, I don't use my sense knowledge because I am a dental student so it is hard for me to get connected with the science knowledge and the knowledge are quite specialized and doesn't apply to everyday situations but sometimes I need.

✓ No, I don't use my science knowledge because I am a dental student, so it is hard for me to get connected with the science knowledge, and the knowledge is quite specialized and doesn't apply to everyday situations, but sometimes I need to.

句末“but sometimes I need”缺少宾语，导致句子不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I would say that I'm not familiar with science subjects because I didn't study much in school.

✓ I would say that I'm not familiar with science subjects because I haven't studied much in school.

这里表达的是从过去到现在的经历，应该用现在完成时“haven't studied”，而不是简单过去时“didn't study”。

× However, I'm interested in astronomy because I find space and universe amazing and maybe in the future I want to learn about science subjects in more details.

✓ However, I'm interested in astronomy because I find space and the universe amazing, and maybe in the future I want to learn about science subjects in more detail.

“universe”前应加定冠词“the”，且“in more details”应改为“in more detail”，因为“detail”在此为不可数名词。

× Yes, I think it is really important because science helps us learn better about the world from the functioning of our bodies to the environment we live in, and I think a basic knowledge of science can help people to make informed decisions for the technology, science and health issues.

✓ Yes, I think it is really important because science helps us learn better about the world, from the functioning of our bodies to the environment we live in, and I think a basic knowledge of science can help people make informed decisions about technology, science, and health issues.

“help people to make”中“to”可省略；“decisions for”应改为“decisions about”，介词使用错误。

× Yes, I really like watching scientific programs because I venture contacts fascinating and educational.

✓ Yes, I really like watching scientific programs because I find the content fascinating and educational.

“venture contacts”表达错误，应为“I find the content”，且“content”是不可数名词，表示“内容”。

× Yes, I really like watching scientific programs because I venture contacts fascinating and educational.

✓ Yes, I really like watching scientific programs because I find the content fascinating and educational.

形容词顺序错误，应先用“fascinating”再用“educational”，且应修正为正确表达。