Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý.

예시: I started using the internet when I was about 10 years old. Since then, I have used it for various purposes such as studying, entertainment, and communication.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh.

예시: I usually go online from 8:00 PM to 10:00 PM because I am free during that time. I often use the internet to read books and find documents for my studies.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I remember when I was in primary school, my parents did not allow me to use social media because I was easily distracted by games and unreliable news. They wanted me to focus on my studies.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý nhưng cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn về mục đích sử dụng internet của bạn.

예시: I spend about one to two hours online every day, mainly for studying. I use the internet to find important documents and exercises from websites like Google to improve my learning.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những từ không phù hợp hoặc sai chính tả. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về các hoạt động bạn sẽ làm khi không có internet.

예시: If I didn't have the internet, I would spend my time listening to music and reading books for entertainment. I would also use textbooks to study instead of searching online.

× Have used the Internet, thinks they were staying in this second because it is over the roof.

✓ I have used the Internet since I was young because it is very useful.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure, making it confusing. The phrase 'thinks they were staying in this second because it is over the roof' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction provides a clear subject 'I', verb 'have used', and a logical reason for using the Internet.

× For many different people.

✓ I use it for many different purposes.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it an incomplete sentence. The correction completes the sentence with a subject and verb to convey the intended meaning.

× That is the reason why I think that I can use the Internet. Easily for many different purposes.

✓ That is the reason why I think I can use the Internet easily for many different purposes.

The original sentence incorrectly splits 'easily' into a new sentence fragment. The correction combines the sentence properly and places the adverb 'easily' correctly.

× I usually go online from 8:00 PM to 10:00 PM because I'm quite free at that time were over I also.

✓ I usually go online from 8:00 PM to 10:00 PM because I'm quite free at that time. Moreover, I also...

The original sentence is confusing and contains a fragment 'were over I also' which is incorrect. The correction separates the ideas into clearer sentences and corrects the phrase.

× The line went on for. Many books and documents.

✓ I also use the internet to read many books and documents.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a complete sentence that conveys the intended meaning.

× Sure, I can recall a time when I wasn't allowed to use social media in my primers.

✓ Sure, I can recall a time when I wasn't allowed to use social media in my primary school.

The word 'primers' is incorrect in this context; 'primary school' is the correct term. The tense is correct but the vocabulary needs correction.

× Good, because I'm quite easy to be distracted by all I games an many yellow journalism.

✓ It's good because I am easily distracted by games and misleading information.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'I games an many yellow journalism' is incorrect. The correction uses appropriate vocabulary and correct sentence structure.

× Moreover, my parents are quite strict me.

✓ Moreover, my parents are quite strict with me.

The preposition 'with' is required after 'strict' to indicate the relationship. The original sentence omits this preposition.

× Are the Internet takes me from one to two hours for studying every day because I need to apply important documents that exercises from chest, DVT or Google so I can so I can study better.

✓ I spend one to two hours on the Internet every day studying because I need to access important documents and exercises from Chest, DVT, or Google so I can study better.

The original sentence is confusing and contains grammatical errors such as 'Are the Internet takes me'. The correction clarifies the subject and verb agreement and improves sentence flow.

× Ellis spent time listening to music and reading books. And for entertaining.

✓ I spend time listening to music and reading books for entertainment.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines them into a coherent sentence with correct verb tense and structure.

× Instead of using social media such as Facebook or TikTok.

✓ Instead of using social media such as Facebook or TikTok, I do other activities.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. The correction completes the sentence to make it grammatically correct.

× Moreover, I can also fly important documents in textbooks instead of fighting on chest DVT.

✓ Moreover, I can also find important documents in textbooks instead of searching on Chest or DVT.

The original sentence contains incorrect word usage: 'fly' and 'fighting' are incorrect. The correction uses appropriate verbs 'find' and 'searching' to convey the intended meaning.