Internet— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте ответ грамматически правильно и короче: укажите чёткое время начала, используйте прошедшее время и уберите повторы. Также добавьте небольшую деталь для конкретики.

예시: I started using the Internet when I was in fifth grade because my father bought me a smartphone. At that time I mostly used it to play games and watch videos.

제안: Дайте прямой ответ на вопрос (например, ежедневное/несколько раз в день), используйте связку причин (because) и завершите мысль; избегайте незаконченных предложений и неправильных слов.

예시: I go online several times a day, mainly to check messages and browse news, because most of my communication and information comes through the Internet.

제안: Скажите прямо, была ли ситуация, и объясните контекст грамотно: используйте прошедшее время, корректные формы (was/were, didn't), и свяжите предложения связками (but, so).

예시: No, I was never completely banned from using the Internet, but when I was preparing for an important test I stopped using social media for a week so I could focus on studying.

제안: Дайте ясный ответ и объясните причину грамматически правильно: используйте правильные времена, местоимения и фразы о привычках (spend time, try to cut down). Предложите конкретное действие, которое вы предпринимаете.

예시: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because many parts of my daily routine depend on it. I'm trying to limit my screen time by setting specific hours for studying and turning off notifications.

제안: Ответ грамматически близок к правильному, но устраните повторения и ошибки в словосочетаниях; уточните примеры действий и используйте связки (for example, such as).

예시: If there were no Internet, I think I would be more responsible. I would do my homework earlier and study more carefully. For example, I would discuss lessons with classmates after school or meet in the library to study together.

× If I don't mistake, I start using Internet approximately in fifth grade school because then I because then my father buy me smartphone.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, I started using the internet when I was in fifth grade because my father bought me a smartphone.

The sentence has multiple tense and article errors. Use 'If I'm not mistaken' (fixed phrase) and past tense 'started' and 'was' to match the past time reference (fifth grade). 'Internet' should have the article 'the'. The verb for the father is past: 'bought'. Also remove redundant phrase 'because then'. Suggestion: place time expressions correctly and keep past tense consistently for past events.

× I'm often online because I previously look at the mall and.

✓ I'm often online because I usually browse the mall's website.

The original mixes present and past forms incorrectly. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I'm often online' and 'I usually browse' or 'I often look at'. 'Previously' implies past; use 'usually' or 'often'. 'Look at the mall and' is incomplete; clarify with 'the mall's website' or 'online shopping sites'. Ensure sentence is complete.

× No, the situation not happened before, but when I was preparing to the test. I'm delayed all of the all of the social media resources and then I haven't have a chance to visit them.

✓ No, that hasn't happened before, but when I was preparing for the test I deleted all of my social media apps and then I didn't have a chance to visit them.

Use correct perfect and past tenses and prepositions: 'that hasn't happened before' (present perfect), 'preparing for the test' (preposition 'for'), 'deleted' (past simple) instead of 'delayed', and 'didn't have' (negative past) instead of 'haven't have'. Also add possessive 'my' for 'social media apps'. Combine clauses into one coherent sentence.

× Yes, I'm really spent much time on Internet because, uh, it they look for my daily routine and I'm much to stop using the Internet all so much.

✓ Yes, I really spend a lot of time on the internet because it is part of my daily routine, and it's hard for me to stop using it so much.

Use present simple 'I spend' for habitual action instead of 'I'm really spent'. Use 'a lot of time' for quantity. 'On the internet' requires the article 'the'. 'It they look for my daily routine' is incorrect; use 'it is part of my daily routine'. 'I'm much to stop' should be 'it's hard for me to stop'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing.

× If there were no Internet, I think I would be more responsible because I would start doing my homework earlier and study more thoughtfully. I would also communicate with classmates face to face, for example by dis discussing lesson after school or studying together in the library.

✓ If there were no internet, I think I would be more responsible because I would start doing my homework earlier and study more carefully. I would also communicate with classmates face to face, for example by discussing lessons after school or studying together in the library.

Use consistent conditional form and correct verb forms: 'If there were no internet' is fine for the unreal present. Use 'study more carefully' instead of 'study more thoughtfully' for clarity. Remove duplicated word 'dis' and use plural 'lessons' if referring generally. 'Internet' should be lowercase or 'the internet'; maintain consistency. Ensure gerund form 'discussing' is correct.