Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as mentioning tea twice and try to use linking words to improve flow. For example, you could say, "I usually start my morning with green tea, followed by eggs, because I like to eat healthily."

예시: I usually start my morning with green tea, followed by eggs, because I like to eat healthily.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and contains repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because it provides energy for the whole day and helps people feel refreshed."

예시: Yes, I believe breakfast is very important because it provides energy for the whole day and helps people feel refreshed.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes comparison, but it has some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Use linking words like "whereas" or "however" to make the contrast clearer. For example, "Yes, my mornings are quite different now. Whereas I used to have only tea and bread as a child, now I start with green tea and eggs because they provide protein."

예시: Yes, my mornings are quite different now. Whereas I used to have only tea and bread as a child, now I start with green tea and eggs because they provide protein.

제안: Your answer shows intention but is somewhat repetitive and could be more fluent. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking phrases to express your ideas clearly. For example, "Definitely, I plan to change my morning routine in the future by choosing healthier options, such as smoothies or lighter meals."

예시: Definitely, I plan to change my morning routine in the future by choosing healthier options, such as smoothies or lighter meals.

× I try to eat healthy in the morning, so I start with the green tea and then after that I am having egg with the tea.

✓ I try to eat healthy in the morning, so I start with green tea and then after that I have eggs with the tea.

The phrase 'I am having egg' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense for a habitual action. Habitual actions are better expressed in the simple present tense, so 'I have eggs' is correct. Also, 'egg' should be plural 'eggs' when referring to a typical breakfast portion.

× I try to eat healthy in the morning, so I start with the green tea and then after that I am having egg with the tea.

✓ I try to eat healthy in the morning, so I start with green tea and then after that I have eggs with the tea.

The word 'egg' should be plural 'eggs' because it refers to a countable item typically eaten in more than one piece for breakfast.

× Yes, breakfast is very important in the morning it it will give the energy to the whole to the person for whole day and the person can also feel refreshed when they when they have breakfast. So definitely. People should.

✓ Yes, breakfast is very important in the morning because it gives energy to a person for the whole day, and the person can also feel refreshed when they have breakfast. So definitely, people should eat breakfast.

The original sentence is run-on and fragmented, lacking proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding 'because' clarifies the cause-effect relationship, and completing the last sentence improves clarity and sentence completeness.

× Yes, there is a big difference between the mornings and my childhood and now.

✓ Yes, there is a big difference between the mornings of my childhood and now.

The phrase 'between the mornings and my childhood and now' is unclear. It should specify 'the mornings of my childhood and now' to correctly compare the two time periods.

× At that time I was having only tea with the with the bread.

✓ At that time I only had tea with bread.

The past continuous 'was having' is unnecessary here; simple past 'had' is more appropriate for a habitual past action. Also, 'with the with the bread' is redundant; 'with bread' suffices.

× But right now I try to start my day with the green tea and after that I'm having eggs because it has a lot of protein to fulfill my needs.

✓ But right now I try to start my day with green tea and after that I have eggs because they have a lot of protein to fulfill my needs.

The present continuous 'I'm having' is not suitable for habitual actions; simple present 'I have' is better. Also, 'eggs' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'it'.

× Definitely in the future I will change my morning routine and I will try to eat definitely a healthy options like like a smoothie or anything else like lighter meal.

✓ Definitely in the future I will change my morning routine and I will try to eat healthy options like a smoothie or other lighter meals.

The phrase 'eat definitely a healthy options' is incorrect; 'definitely' should not interrupt the phrase, and 'options' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'like like' is a repetition error, and 'anything else like lighter meal' should be 'other lighter meals' for clarity and correctness.