Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and informative, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and slightly simplifying the explanation. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually skip breakfast because I follow intermittent fasting, which means I eat only during an 8-hour window each day. However, when I do have breakfast, I prefer nutritious sandwiches because they keep me full.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid repeating the word 'breakfast' too often and add a linking phrase to explain why it is important.

예시: Yes, I think breakfast is important because it kick-starts our metabolism and provides the energy needed to stay active throughout the morning.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make the comparison clearer and more natural.

예시: Yes, my mornings have changed a lot since childhood. Back then, my mother always prepared breakfast for me, so I started the day with plenty of energy, whereas now I often skip it due to my diet.

제안: Your answer is direct but could be more natural and fluent by using linking words and correcting grammar (e.g., 'accommodates'). Also, try to expand slightly to give a fuller response.

예시: At the moment, my morning routine suits my needs and accommodates my lifestyle well, so I don't plan to make any changes.

× I usually skip breakfast because I follow a diet called intermittent fasting.

✓ I usually skip breakfast because I follow a diet called intermittent fasting.

No correction needed here as the preposition 'called' is correctly used to introduce the name of the diet.

× This means I only eat during the 8 hour window each day and fast for the remaining 16 hours.

✓ This means I only eat during the 8-hour window each day and fast for the remaining 16 hours.

The phrase '8 hour window' should be hyphenated as '8-hour window' because it is a compound adjective describing 'window'.

× However, when I do have breakfast when I feel hungry, I prefer eating sandwiches because they are nutritious.

✓ However, when I do have breakfast because I feel hungry, I prefer eating sandwiches because they are nutritious.

The phrase 'when I do have breakfast when I feel hungry' is redundant and awkward. Replacing the second 'when' with 'because' clarifies the reason for having breakfast.

× I believe breakfast is important to most people because breakfast is the first meal of every day and it provides energy for us to do the activities.

✓ I believe breakfast is important to most people because breakfast is the first meal of every day and it provides energy for us to do activities.

The phrase 'do the activities' is incorrect because 'activities' is a general plural noun here and does not require the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, the morning of my childhood was totally different from now.

✓ Yes, the mornings of my childhood were totally different from now.

'Morning' should be plural 'mornings' to refer to multiple days in childhood, and the verb should be plural 'were' to agree with the plural subject.

× Currently my morning routine suits my needs and accommodate my lifestyle, so I'm not going to change my morning routine.

✓ Currently my morning routine suits my needs and accommodates my lifestyle, so I'm not going to change my morning routine.

The verb 'accommodate' should be in third person singular form 'accommodates' to agree with the singular subject 'morning routine'.