Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Start with a direct answer, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, mention what you eat and why, and keep your sentences concise and coherent.

예시: I usually wake up at 7:00 AM before work. First, I take a shower, then I have a cup of coffee. For breakfast, I eat eggs because I love their taste and they give me energy for the day.

제안: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and be specific about why breakfast is important.

예시: Absolutely, I believe breakfast is the most important meal of the day because it provides energy to start the day. Also, eating a healthy breakfast helps maintain good health and improves concentration.

제안: Provide a clearer and more complete answer by using proper grammar and adding supporting details with linking words. Explain your routine in childhood and now, and mention if there are any similarities or differences.

예시: Actually, my morning routine has not changed much since my childhood. I still wake up early and have breakfast before starting my day, which helps me stay focused and energetic.

제안: Make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and linking words. Explain why you like your routine and give specific reasons to support your opinion.

예시: I love my current morning routine because I have followed it since I was 10 years old. It helps me feel organized and ready for the day, so I don't want to change it.

× I usually wake up 7:00 AM before work and I take a shower and preparing breakfast but but my day starts I take a cup of coffee and and my breakfast is egg because I love I love eggs.

✓ I usually wake up at 7:00 AM before work, take a shower, and prepare breakfast. But before my day starts, I take a cup of coffee, and my breakfast is eggs because I love eggs.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'preparing' instead of the base verb 'prepare' after 'and'. When listing actions, the base form of the verb should be used after 'and' unless a continuous tense is intended. Also, 'wake up 7:00 AM' lacks the preposition 'at'. Repetition of words like 'but' and 'and' should be avoided for clarity.

× Absolutely, I believe breakfast is crucial, often refined to the most meal of the day because provide energy to start the day and give you a good health and running smoothie. So.

✓ Absolutely, I believe breakfast is crucial, often referred to as the most important meal of the day because it provides energy to start the day and gives you good health and a running smoothie.

The sentence has structural issues: 'refined' should be 'referred', 'the most meal' is incomplete and should be 'the most important meal', and the verbs 'provide' and 'give' need subjects and correct forms ('it provides', 'gives'). Also, 'a good health' is incorrect; 'good health' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'running smoothie' is unclear and may be a misstatement.

× Actually, during childhood and from now my current routine doesn't change.

✓ Actually, during my childhood and now, my current routine hasn't changed.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'During childhood' refers to the past, so past perfect or present perfect tense is appropriate. 'Doesn't change' is present simple, which conflicts with the time frame. Using 'hasn't changed' correctly indicates that the routine has remained the same from past to present.

× Actually, my current routine, I love it. That's mainly because I used I used it daily routine from 10 years old. So and and many reasons to give me.

✓ Actually, I love my current routine. That's mainly because I have used it as my daily routine since I was 10 years old for many reasons.

The sentence has tense and structure errors. 'I used I used it daily routine from 10 years old' is incorrect; it should be 'I have used it as my daily routine since I was 10 years old'. The phrase 'So and and many reasons to give me' is incomplete and unclear, so it was rephrased for clarity. Using present perfect 'have used' indicates an action continuing from the past to present.