Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「in our morning」は不自然で、「in the morning」が正しいです。また、文を簡潔にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。

예시: I usually don't eat breakfast because I am very busy in the morning and have to catch the train. Therefore, I often skip breakfast and eat lunch instead.

제안: 内容は良いですが、より自然な表現に改善できます。例えば、「taking breakfast」は不自然で、「having breakfast」が適切です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、文をつなげると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, definitely. Having breakfast is essential, especially for children's nutrition, because it helps their bodies grow healthier compared to skipping breakfast.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りがあります。「took breakfast」は不自然で、「had breakfast」が適切です。また、「families」ではなく「family」が正しいです。内容を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

예시: Yes, I think so. When I was a child, I always had breakfast with my family. However, nowadays, children tend to have breakfast alone, and often they choose inexpensive options.

제안: 回答は理解できますが、「Actually.」の後に文が途切れているように感じられます。また、「in every time around」は不自然で、「around every time」や「around 7:00 or 8:00 AM」などに修正しましょう。接続詞を使い、文を滑らかに繋げることも大切です。

예시: Yes, I would like to change my morning routine. Actually, I am not good at waking up early. However, I would like to go to a cafe around 7:00 or 8:00 AM to read books.

× Actually, I don't usually eat any foods in the morning because I am very busy and have to get on the train in our morning.

✓ Actually, I don't usually eat any food in the morning because I am very busy and have to get on the train in the morning.

'Food' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'foods' in this context. Also, 'in our morning' is incorrect; it should be 'in the morning' to indicate the general time of day.

× Actually, I don't usually eat any foods in the morning because I am very busy and have to get on the train in our morning.

✓ Actually, I don't usually eat any food in the morning because I am very busy and have to get on the train in the morning.

The preposition 'in' is correct, but 'our morning' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'in the morning' to refer to the general time of day.

× So almost every day I eat lunch.

✓ So almost every day I eat lunch.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Especially for the nutrition of the children, taking breakfast is essential.

✓ Especially for children's nutrition, having breakfast is essential.

The phrase 'the nutrition of the children' is awkward; 'children's nutrition' is more natural. Also, 'taking breakfast' is less common than 'having breakfast'.

× It can help their body grow much healthier than without breakfast.

✓ It can help their bodies grow much healthier than without breakfast.

'Body' should be plural 'bodies' to agree with 'their' (plural pronoun). Also, 'much healthier' is acceptable, but 'much' modifies 'healthier' correctly here.

× When I was a child I always took breakfast with my families.

✓ When I was a child I always had breakfast with my family.

'Families' is incorrect here; 'family' is the correct singular collective noun. Also, 'took breakfast' is less common than 'had breakfast'.

× On the other hand, recently children tended to have breakfast on their own and it is very cheap.

✓ On the other hand, recently children tend to have breakfast on their own and it is very cheap.

'Tended' is past tense, but 'recently' suggests present or ongoing action, so 'tend' (present tense) is appropriate.

× Actually. I'm not good at waking up in early hours.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at waking up in the early hours.

The phrase 'in early hours' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, the period after 'Actually' should be a comma.

× On the other hand, I would like to go to a cafe in every time around 7:00 or 8:00 AM to read books.

✓ On the other hand, I would like to go to a cafe every time around 7:00 or 8:00 AM to read books.

'In every time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'every time' without 'in'.