Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and complete sentences. Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I usually skip breakfast because I believe that high cortisol levels in the morning help me stay alert. Therefore, I prefer to eat later in the day to avoid feeling hungry all day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your opinion clearly. Avoid filler words like 'hmm' and be specific in your explanation.

예시: I think breakfast importance varies from person to person. For me, it is not important because high cortisol levels in the morning reduce my appetite, so eating early can cause cravings throughout the day.

제안: Try to attempt an answer even if you are unsure. You can say a few sentences about your memories or habits from childhood compared to now. This shows your ability to communicate and develop ideas.

예시: Yes, my mornings are different now compared to my childhood. When I was a child, I used to have breakfast with my family, but now I usually skip it and start my day alone.

제안: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve fluency. Also, provide more specific reasons or results to enrich your answer.

예시: I changed my morning routine this summer by skipping breakfast, which helps me avoid feeling hungry all day and has helped me lose weight. Therefore, I plan to continue this habit and observe further results.

× I don't eat breakfast because when you wake up in the morning, your stress hormone cortisol is high, so it helps you to be improving. So all day and.

✓ I don't eat breakfast because when you wake up in the morning, your stress hormone cortisol is high, which helps you improve throughout the day.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'So it helps you to be improving' is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase 'So all day and.' is incomplete. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatically correct sentence using a relative clause and proper verb form.

× It depends on person.

✓ It depends on the person.

The phrase 'depends on person' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'person'. Also, 'person' is a singular countable noun and requires an article in this context.

× As I said before, your cortisol is high in the morning, so when you eat something all day long you have some cravings you. Hmm.

✓ As I said before, your cortisol is high in the morning, so if you eat something, you will have cravings all day long.

The original sentence is confusing and contains misplaced words ('cravings you'). The correction clarifies the conditional relationship and corrects word order to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Can you ask me next question because I don't have answer for that question.

✓ Can you ask me the next question because I don't have an answer for that question.

The original sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'next question' and the indefinite article 'an' before 'answer'. Adding these articles corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× That helps me to don't feel hungry all day long and to lose weight.

✓ That helps me not to feel hungry all day long and to lose weight.

The phrase 'helps me to don't feel' is incorrect because 'don't' cannot follow 'to'. The correct form is 'helps me not to feel' where 'not' negates the infinitive verb 'to feel'.