Breakfast— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to be more concise and natural by using simpler sentence structures and correct article usage. Also, avoid redundancy and improve fluency by linking ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually eat nutritious foods like apples, oranges, and protein bars for breakfast. Sometimes, I drink milk if it's available.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid confusing phrases and be more precise.

예시: Yes, breakfast is very important because it is the first meal after waking up. Eating a nutritious breakfast helps me stay focused and healthy throughout the day. Also, it prevents me from feeling too hungry later.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and has grammar errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct verb tenses, and link your points logically. Also, avoid awkward phrases and be specific about the differences.

예시: Yes, there are differences. When I was a child, I used to sleep longer and wake up early to eat some fruit. Now, I sleep less and need to drink coffee or tea to feel awake and focused in the morning.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and repetition. Try to combine sentences using linking words like 'so' or 'because' and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use correct comparative forms and be clear about your reasons.

예시: Yes, I would like to wake up earlier, around 5:00 AM instead of 8:00 AM, so I can exercise regularly and reduce my coffee intake. This change will help me stay healthy and avoid caffeine addiction.

× I usually consume nutritious food and fruits such as apple, oranges, as well as some protein bars for the breakfast and some milk perhaps someday whenever it is available.

✓ I usually consume nutritious food and fruits such as apples, oranges, as well as some protein bars for breakfast and some milk perhaps someday whenever it is available.

The word 'apple' should be plural 'apples' to match the plural 'oranges' and the general context of listing multiple fruits. Also, 'for the breakfast' should be 'for breakfast' because 'breakfast' is an uncountable meal noun here and does not need 'the'.

× It's absolutely breakfast is very vital for your health as it can be used as a first meal that you eat after you wake up.

✓ Absolutely, breakfast is very vital for your health as it is the first meal you eat after you wake up.

The original sentence has a redundant and awkward structure with 'It's absolutely breakfast is'. It should be simplified to 'Absolutely, breakfast is' for clarity and correctness.

× Similarly, having breakfast will make sure that you do not get hungry or you do not consume much more whenever you are taking milk.

✓ Similarly, having breakfast will make sure that you do not get hungry or consume much more when you drink milk.

The phrase 'whenever you are taking milk' is awkward; 'when you drink milk' is more natural. Also, 'you do not consume much more' is better without the repeated 'you do not'.

× Yes, absolutely. I used to sleep a lot before, so I used to wake up very early and only consume part of the fruit.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I used to sleep a lot before, so I used to wake up very early and only consume part of the fruit.

No correction needed here as the past tense 'used to' is correctly used to describe past habits.

× But nowadays I have very short time to sleep so I have to either drink extra coffee as well as tea as soon as I wake up to get concentrated and to get properly waken up from the.

✓ But nowadays I have very little time to sleep, so I have to drink extra coffee as well as tea as soon as I wake up to concentrate and to properly wake up.

The phrase 'very short time to sleep' should be 'very little time to sleep'. 'Get concentrated' is incorrect; it should be 'concentrate'. 'Get properly waken up from the' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'properly wake up'. Also, 'either' is unnecessary here because only one option is given.

× Absolutely. I think I have to wake up much more earlier now, maybe to 5:00 AM rather than just 8:00 AM.

✓ Absolutely. I think I have to wake up much earlier now, maybe at 5:00 AM rather than just 8:00 AM.

The phrase 'much more earlier' is incorrect; 'much earlier' is correct. Also, 'to 5:00 AM' should be 'at 5:00 AM' as the correct preposition for time.

× Because whenever I wake up early then I could go to the gym or do regular exercise and only consume coffee in a limited amount so that I would remain healthy.

✓ Because whenever I wake up early, I can go to the gym or do regular exercise and consume only a limited amount of coffee so that I remain healthy.

'Only consume coffee in a limited amount' is awkward; 'consume only a limited amount of coffee' is correct. Also, 'could' should be 'can' to express ability in the present/future. 'Would remain' should be 'remain' for general truth.

× Because nowadays I'm getting caffeine addicted and I think I need to change my morning.

✓ Because nowadays I'm getting addicted to caffeine and I think I need to change my morning routine.

The phrase 'getting caffeine addicted' is incorrect; it should be 'getting addicted to caffeine'. Also, 'change my morning' is incomplete; 'change my morning routine' is clearer.